Rejoice: Christmas Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "As Carols Sing of Peace on Earth"Christmas poems in various formats.
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Comment from IndianaIrish
I'm really getting to like this poetry style, Brooke, and it's because you write them so well that I hardly even notice the repetition. Excellent poem.
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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I'm really getting to like this poetry style, Brooke, and it's because you write them so well that I hardly even notice the repetition. Excellent poem.
Indy :>)
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Karyn. I'm so glad you like this Christmas triolet :-) Brooke
Comment from fictionwriter
You make this have a sing-song quality to it. It's a wonderful poem that flows off your tongue. Very enjoyable. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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You make this have a sing-song quality to it. It's a wonderful poem that flows off your tongue. Very enjoyable. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Joy, for your thoughtful response :-) Brooke
Comment from Eternal Muse
Brooke, you've painted an idyllic picture of Christmas blessing; and what a superb image!
Loved these:
As carols sing of peace on Earth
I send my wishes Heavenwards
on this the day of Jesus' birth
This was very festive; and sang praise to the upcoming holiday; it brought holiday to my room, and I thank you.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Brooke, you've painted an idyllic picture of Christmas blessing; and what a superb image!
Loved these:
As carols sing of peace on Earth
I send my wishes Heavenwards
on this the day of Jesus' birth
This was very festive; and sang praise to the upcoming holiday; it brought holiday to my room, and I thank you.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Yelena. I'm so glad this triolet had the holiday spirit in it for you :-) Brooke
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Yes, after 2 years in Vegas, I welcome the real Christmas spirit, with the snow and sleigh! (lol)
Comment from Soulester
Hi, Brooke, This triolet gives the reader the sensation of a music box turning. I really love the thought of carols singing pure and Holy words. Again, my thanks for sharing. Mary
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Hi, Brooke, This triolet gives the reader the sensation of a music box turning. I really love the thought of carols singing pure and Holy words. Again, my thanks for sharing. Mary
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Mary - I'm so glad the musicality of the triolet came through :-) Brooke
Comment from missy98writer
adewperal,
I loved your reflective triolet poem "As carols sing of peace on earth". This poem is well constructed. This triolet is a great offering after your poem "Peace". I liked the line:
"I send my wishes Heavenwards".
There is nothing to change the poem is excellent. The art work is great.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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adewperal,
I loved your reflective triolet poem "As carols sing of peace on earth". This poem is well constructed. This triolet is a great offering after your poem "Peace". I liked the line:
"I send my wishes Heavenwards".
There is nothing to change the poem is excellent. The art work is great.
Melissa.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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Thank you, Melissa - I appreciate your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from mrsmajor
Your Triolet was very well done, I know the form, but have not written one in a good while. I enjoyed the words used and the picture was chosen well for this piece. No spag, and, of course nothing that I would want to change,
Thank you very much for sharing this Holiday poem with us, I enjoyed the sentiment so much.
My Best Regards. :-)
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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Your Triolet was very well done, I know the form, but have not written one in a good while. I enjoyed the words used and the picture was chosen well for this piece. No spag, and, of course nothing that I would want to change,
Thank you very much for sharing this Holiday poem with us, I enjoyed the sentiment so much.
My Best Regards. :-)
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009
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thank you, Mrs Major - I'm so glad you enjoyed my use of the triolet form :-) Brooke
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You're quite welcome, Brooke, it was my pleasure to read and review. :-)
Comment from Dave M
Brooke,
I guess it's the season, even if it isn't quite December yet. I enjoyed this Christmas carol and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Brooke,
I guess it's the season, even if it isn't quite December yet. I enjoyed this Christmas carol and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009
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Thank you, Dave - Advent is here :-) Brooke
Comment from tonydem
I sense a theme here. I know your saying 'Duh Tony!' I know it's the time of Christ's birth. I'm just wondering if we will delight in a poem a day from you till the 25th. This one is very hopeful in nature.
Tony
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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I sense a theme here. I know your saying 'Duh Tony!' I know it's the time of Christ's birth. I'm just wondering if we will delight in a poem a day from you till the 25th. This one is very hopeful in nature.
Tony
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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I don't know if all my poems between now and then will be about Christmas, but I'm sure a bunch will be, at least :-) Thank you, Tony - you're a peach. :-) Brooke
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Better a peach then the pits. lol
Comment from AnnaLinda
adewpearl,
I enjoyed reading your triolet "As Carols Sing of Peace on Earth," It is reflective and it sends a message of peace and the true meaning of Christmas. Here is one of my favorite parts of it.
"as carols sing of peace on Earth
I send my wishes Heavenwards."
Your presentation is beautiful as well!
SweetLinda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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adewpearl,
I enjoyed reading your triolet "As Carols Sing of Peace on Earth," It is reflective and it sends a message of peace and the true meaning of Christmas. Here is one of my favorite parts of it.
"as carols sing of peace on Earth
I send my wishes Heavenwards."
Your presentation is beautiful as well!
SweetLinda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you, SweetLinda - so glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke
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You are most welcome!
Comment from debskatz
Hey brooke,
another terrific triolet! and certainly a beautiful sentiment as well. wish we'd all truly realize the worth of the songs of peace. thanks for sharing your terrific triolets with us! when ya gonna put 'em in a book?
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Hey brooke,
another terrific triolet! and certainly a beautiful sentiment as well. wish we'd all truly realize the worth of the songs of peace. thanks for sharing your terrific triolets with us! when ya gonna put 'em in a book?
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you, Deb. I know I need to work on books :-) Brooke