POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from pilgrim_of_truth
Short and powerful, this poem could work for any parent, whether or not they have experienced what the author experienced or not.
I felt for her while also taking something rather magical away
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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Short and powerful, this poem could work for any parent, whether or not they have experienced what the author experienced or not.
I felt for her while also taking something rather magical away
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Pilgrim
Thanks so much for your kind review and your thoughtful response. CArol
Comment from kingskid
What a beautiful tribute to your son. Very moving and an awesome photo.
The whole poem is truly beautiful and moving. I liked it all.
Our lives live forever
In precious memories.
Is very poignant and powerful.
Thank God that He does give you memories.
May you be blessed.
kingskid
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What a beautiful tribute to your son. Very moving and an awesome photo.
The whole poem is truly beautiful and moving. I liked it all.
Our lives live forever
In precious memories.
Is very poignant and powerful.
Thank God that He does give you memories.
May you be blessed.
kingskid
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Kingskid
I was feeling real low because another tragedy knocked at our family's door the other day and then this contest popped up. Maybe it was Micheal's way to helping his Mom. I am overwhelmed this morning by all the responses and the stars are twinkling everywhere. I truly have found a lot of friends on FanStory. Thanks you very very much.
Smiling through tears of joy, Carol
Comment from kukarad70
Dear Begin Again, you always begin again to write more and more appreciable. Your lines of your poem giving meaning of thousand lines. Great capability I found in your writing. The better you write the better result you will get. I seem you have been gifted art by god, so you are able to write, so always try to respect this given power of presentation by god in your writing field. No way to say anymore beautifully you have written your poem and no place you have left to mark out pointing somewhere less ingredients you have supplied. Thanks a lot keep on trying writing more and more I will be reading more and more. Kamal
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Dear Begin Again, you always begin again to write more and more appreciable. Your lines of your poem giving meaning of thousand lines. Great capability I found in your writing. The better you write the better result you will get. I seem you have been gifted art by god, so you are able to write, so always try to respect this given power of presentation by god in your writing field. No way to say anymore beautifully you have written your poem and no place you have left to mark out pointing somewhere less ingredients you have supplied. Thanks a lot keep on trying writing more and more I will be reading more and more. Kamal
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Kukarad
Thank you for your kind response and wishes. I appreciate it very much. Smiles, CArol
Comment from jmyron
Touching. A happy/sad remembrance. God's gift was your son, for however short a time it might be. His next gift will be when you see him again later...
John
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Touching. A happy/sad remembrance. God's gift was your son, for however short a time it might be. His next gift will be when you see him again later...
John
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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John
I was blessed to have him in my life. He did a lot of living in those short years. Smiles, CArol
Comment from melyuki
Wow, sis this is just beautiful. touched my heart, filled me with warmth and nurtured my soul. This has to be the picture you were trying to post earlier. Tell me it is and then I will tell you how much I can see you in his smile.
And if I am wrong, then it is wonderful what the mind can envisage..... just the best. smiles and warm fuzzies everywhere. luv from Me
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Wow, sis this is just beautiful. touched my heart, filled me with warmth and nurtured my soul. This has to be the picture you were trying to post earlier. Tell me it is and then I will tell you how much I can see you in his smile.
And if I am wrong, then it is wonderful what the mind can envisage..... just the best. smiles and warm fuzzies everywhere. luv from Me
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Little Sis
I was feeling real low because of Nathaniel and then this contest popped up. Maybe it was Micheal's way to helping his Mom. I am overwhelmed this morning by all the responses and the stars are twinkling everywhere. I truly have found a lot of friends on FanStory.But best of all I found you. Guess Michael and God thought I was worthy of an exceptional gift this time. Thanks you very very much.
Smiling through tears of joy, Carol
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you know you are always welcome sis. luv Mel
Comment from wierdgrace
This is so wonderful, and excellent, and emotional, I loved it and this means so much put together with the picture. Thank you so much for sharing this.
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This is so wonderful, and excellent, and emotional, I loved it and this means so much put together with the picture. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Wierdgrace
I was very fortunate to have him for the four lyears I did. His smile lives with me every day as well as the love in my heart, Thanks, CArol
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, how very beautiful and sad. He was a handsome, fine and adorable boy, with a sparkling smile. You were blessed indeed to have his love for the full 4 years. Incredibly moving poem. I love the last lines where you say that your loves forever in precious memories.
I could relate to this poem, having lost my both parents in January of 2007. Part of me died with them. But they live in me, in our memories. And it is my most precious gift.
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Oh, how very beautiful and sad. He was a handsome, fine and adorable boy, with a sparkling smile. You were blessed indeed to have his love for the full 4 years. Incredibly moving poem. I love the last lines where you say that your loves forever in precious memories.
I could relate to this poem, having lost my both parents in January of 2007. Part of me died with them. But they live in me, in our memories. And it is my most precious gift.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Yeltel
I was feeling real low because another tragedy knocked at our family's door the other day and then this contest popped up. Maybe it was Micheal's way to helping his Mom. I am overwhelmed this morning by all the responses and the stars are twinkling everywhere. I truly have found a lot of friends on FanStory. Thanks you very very much.
Smiling through tears of joy, Carol
Comment from becky7777
so moving so sad so emotional. so sorry for your lost but sounds like he made your life sunshine while alive.
good luck in the contest
Becky
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so moving so sad so emotional. so sorry for your lost but sounds like he made your life sunshine while alive.
good luck in the contest
Becky
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Becky
Wow..Michael would give you a big hug for this review and so will I. Thanks for understanding and for the stars.
I was feeling real low because another tragedy knocked at our family's door the other day and then this contest popped up. Maybe it was Micheal's way to helping his Mom. I am overwhelmed this morning by all the responses and the stars are twinkling everywhere. I truly have found a lot of friends on FanStory. Thanks you very very much.
Smiling through tears of joy, Carol
Comment from Signaler
Hello Begin Again, It is so nice to meet you and to read this love poem to your son. He is the image of his mother. Such a darling boy Your poem really touched my heart and I give you my first six star rating this week.
Keep your Angel On your Shoulder,
As Always, Signaler
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Hello Begin Again, It is so nice to meet you and to read this love poem to your son. He is the image of his mother. Such a darling boy Your poem really touched my heart and I give you my first six star rating this week.
Keep your Angel On your Shoulder,
As Always, Signaler
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Signaler
I am blown away by everyone's reponses to this little poem. It means the world to me. I can't thank you enough for your thoughts and for your stars. You will always have an Angel looking down on you....Smiles, CArol
Comment from Janelle
A beautiful tribute to your beautiful son Begin Again. This is an excellent entry for the contest, as the words are minimal but have a maximum impact. The photo shows exactly why his smile is emblazoned on your soul. well written, poignant poem. Well done, regards, Jan
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A beautiful tribute to your beautiful son Begin Again. This is an excellent entry for the contest, as the words are minimal but have a maximum impact. The photo shows exactly why his smile is emblazoned on your soul. well written, poignant poem. Well done, regards, Jan
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Janelle
Yes, his smile is one that I can never ever forget. It seemed to be there even when he was naughty as if you say you love me so why get mad. He was a special little boy.
Thank you so much for the kind review. Carol