Comment from Sloughi

Excellent

Loved it..............great stuff, made me giggle, pretty good acheivement at 7am lol.......just point me in the right direction and I will go for it ha-ha

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Sloughi...Laughter is the best medicine in town so I am glad that I started your day off with it. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from stormwolf2

Excellent

Well if this is not sucking up in the most extreme way, I don't know what is. You have my vote lol.

Good luck and best wishes, Malcolm

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Malcolm...I thank you...Of course, I would have to say this was said in jest in fear that I would be deported from the site. A bit of humor is good for the soul. Thanks for the kind review. Carol

Comment from tati

Excellent

This is truly the naughtiest way to win. Unfortunately you really did as the contest rules said. So, Begin Again will surely Win Again! You have my vote, Carol. Regards, tato (July 23, 2009)

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Tati...Thank you so much. I hope everyone knows this was written in jest..or I will be blushing quite red. Thanks for the review. Take care my friend, Carol

reply by tati on 23-Jul-2009

That was really funny, Carol. I love it. Warm wishes, tati.

Comment from NightWriter

Excellent

"That's Not Fair!" got my vote! It offers it all to me, how can I not vote for it, LOL. Well done entry in this haiku challenge. Bravo!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Nighwriter. I appreciate the vote of confidence. Everything is said in jest but humor is good for the soul. Thanks for reviewing and for the kind words. Carol

Comment from Joyce L.

Excellent

I love it, sounds like a real business trying to strike up some customers. Good luck with this contest and continue to have fun with your writing.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Joyce..Thank you so mucy for the review. A bit of jest never hurt anyone..at least I hope not! Thanks again - Carol

Comment from S.Yocom

Excellent

You really did as the contest rules said, Carol. I think you have found the best way to get people to vote for you. Cute.
Sally

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009

Sally...Hope everyone knows this was all in jest. Totally out of character for me. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from Shirley B

Excellent

This is such a cute poem. You did a great job. good luck in the contest. I mean what more could you ask for right?. This really is a cute poem. Happy writing and again good luck. Shirley

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009

Shirley...I hope everyone knows it was written in jest. Thanks so much for the kind review. Carol

reply by Shirley B on 23-Jul-2009

Dear Carol, I think people will know it was in jest. I love people with a sense of humor. Shirley

Comment from Eleiece K.

Excellent

"...or whatever you need." Does that "whatever" mean that you'll clean my house if I vote for you? *cheeky grin* Great incentive to vote, great poem. Good luck.

Best regards,

Eleiece K.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009

Eleiece...Of course, if you can find me! Everything is said in jest. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from skye

Excellent

Well, original or not, hyou used the requirements to your advantage.
I would imagine that this line would get you what you want.
Well done, with flair.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009

Skye.

Totally out of character and definitely said in jst. Thanks for reviewing. Carol

Comment from pixiemillie

Excellent

Well you certainly followed the contest rules with this one- -I'm sure the voting booth will be so crowded a riot may break out. Cleverly done--what a ploy- -I'm sure you won't deliver, however. Won't they be fooled LOL.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009

Pixiemilie...So my friend, really knows the true me! I'm glad, because a few reviews made me rethink what I had written. It's all in jest, but I am not sure everyone knows that! Thanks for the review and especially for knowing who I am. Carol