Peace
A poem about Peace57 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know God is in charge, but I also know we as humans, have strayed from His teaching. It's my prayer that as a society we return to God's loving care. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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I know God is in charge, but I also know we as humans, have strayed from His teaching. It's my prayer that as a society we return to God's loving care. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Barbara! I really appreciate your review!
Comment from ElPoetry001
You have pointed out many of our negative characteristics.
We must repair our spiritual house; it is divided into a kaleidoscope of negative consequences, driven by those who seek woke clarifications people, places, and times.
We must deny subjective, conjured definitions, that have confirmation in science or religion.
The answers are in the Bible.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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You have pointed out many of our negative characteristics.
We must repair our spiritual house; it is divided into a kaleidoscope of negative consequences, driven by those who seek woke clarifications people, places, and times.
We must deny subjective, conjured definitions, that have confirmation in science or religion.
The answers are in the Bible.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Yes, they are. Thank you so much for your great review! I really appreciate that!
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Stay well.
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Thank you!
stay well
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Thank you! You too!
Comment from Begin Again
Harry's soul-searching and heart-warming words have returned. They are a perfect reminder that the world is spinning off its axis and we are forgetting about the important things--love, joy, and peace. The rich think life is grand and forget about the smaller people who struggle every day to make things meet. We fight wars amongst ourselves and with those across the seas. It's all senseless. Happy New Year to YOU!
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Harry's soul-searching and heart-warming words have returned. They are a perfect reminder that the world is spinning off its axis and we are forgetting about the important things--love, joy, and peace. The rich think life is grand and forget about the smaller people who struggle every day to make things meet. We fight wars amongst ourselves and with those across the seas. It's all senseless. Happy New Year to YOU!
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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LOL! Well, thank you so much Carol - you get it! I really appreciate that!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This reads so lyrically, Harry, your fine words could almost be put to music. I too despair (as we all do) about our failure to achieve enduring peace in a war-ravaged world. Thank you for sharing your gentle but powerful post. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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This reads so lyrically, Harry, your fine words could almost be put to music. I too despair (as we all do) about our failure to achieve enduring peace in a war-ravaged world. Thank you for sharing your gentle but powerful post. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Well, thank you so much Debbie. I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Mintybee
This poem moves from large issues to easy-to-grasp examples nicely. War is big. A single gurney is easy to picture. Nicely done. I like the yearning for something better present in this poem.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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This poem moves from large issues to easy-to-grasp examples nicely. War is big. A single gurney is easy to picture. Nicely done. I like the yearning for something better present in this poem.
Mintybee
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2025
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Thank you Mintybee for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Harry,
This is a great poem about love and war. The whole world has gone crazy and it seems that only the little people such as ourselves notice it. We need world peace.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Harry,
This is a great poem about love and war. The whole world has gone crazy and it seems that only the little people such as ourselves notice it. We need world peace.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thank you Cecilia for seeing the true meaning of the poem! I really appreciate your review! Happy New Year!
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You are welcome and you have a Happy New Year also.
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Thank you!
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You're welcome
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Thank you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem really struck me. The raw emotion in each line paints a picture of the longing you feel for peace. I especially love how you captured the imbalance between the rich and the poor. It's such a powerful message. I feel like your words are an important reminder of what we all should strive for.
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Your poem really struck me. The raw emotion in each line paints a picture of the longing you feel for peace. I especially love how you captured the imbalance between the rich and the poor. It's such a powerful message. I feel like your words are an important reminder of what we all should strive for.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Michael for seeing the real meaning of the poem! I really appreciate that!
