Comment from
Austin Yu
Such a lovely, lovely poem/prayer that you created for Sandra. All the words blended so perfectly together that it was such a beautiful way to end the night. I will keep her in my prayers. I cannot comprehend how she remains so strong, even in the hospital with conditions as terrible as pneumonia. God bless.
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
Thank you so much, Austin! Happy New Year! Blessings!
Comment from
Janis M.
This is a beautiful form and I'm sorry that it comes at a time of distress for a loved one. I hope that they are able to heal. I love your choice for a refrain. It fits perfectly for the message and its connection with each of the lines.
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
Thank you for the thoughtful review!
Blessings in the New Year!!