Comment from Yin Cheah

Excellent

This poem resonated with me. Siblings are special aren't they, and there's always that one special one. I may not share the same memories but I sure can relate to the idea of of a special brother or sister. Reading this gives me a warm glow. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for your lovely review and kind comments for my poem for Greg. Much appreciated my dear friend!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Happy birthday to Greg! Thank you for sharing your wonderful memories of how Greg blessed all of you. You have a beautiful family and it's clear you're all united together in love!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for your lovely review and kind comments for my poem for Greg. Much appreciated my dear friend!

Comment from karenina

Exceptional

Just a poem chock full of sisterly love that literally glows with great memories and affection! Greg will love this! Heck! I live it and I don't even know the man!

Karenina

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023

Oh thank you my Sweet friend! I wanted to try it out on you guys, even if nobody knows them, hoping that someone could relate. Wednesday we are going there and I will give him. My oldest brother, Ron would still be 70 if he hadn't died. Him and Greg we're exactly 11 months apart. And the my little brother died too, so Greg is the only I have left. He?s like Dick Clark, so good looking for his age. Thanks for making my night w the kindest review, sweet words and so appreciated six stars! You?re the best!

reply by karenina on 25-Apr-2023

Give that Greg handsome man a hug from me! (hey, you don't have to tell him)---LOL...

I always thought Dick Clark was suave!

Great poem! Have fun Wednesday!

Comment from Cherish Adams

Excellent

Sweet and funny tribute to a brother you clearly adore. Love the rhyme and rhythm. Sounds like fun memories, a lot of love. Thank you for sharing. Cherish

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for your lovely review and kind comments for my poem for Greg. Much appreciated my dear friend!

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Big sisters can be counted on to remember all the embarrassments, the disappointments, the broken promises, all the things you would like to forget or at least sweep under the rug. Of course if it is the case of you remembering their missteps, they claim that you are mistaken or were too young to understand. : ).

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023

How cool is that, in the same month I have two brothers w birthdays. One decade apart! Lol! What isn't so cool is that the oldest and youngest brothers both died in their forties. I think that was part of why I felt so close to you from the start. You were much like Ron, who would still be 70 himself until May. He was funny and charming and you are so much like him!
Anyway thanks for reading Greg?s poem, my dear other brother!

reply by nomi338 on 25-Apr-2023

Did I ever tell you that I love you dearly little sis? I do. Thank you.

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023

Right back atcha dear brother!

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Debi,
for one, I know Greg's going to feel ten feet tall after this heartfelt trip down memory lane. A truly wonderful poem featuring your Brother's loving unselfish acts.

Hey(((((((((, is the rhythm smooth all the way... is the meter slightly off here and there? Yeah, sure, but who cares when it has such a beautiful intent with such a magic story of memories attached.

I enjoyed reading this very much Debi.

Hope you're doing well friend!

With our thoughts we create...
indelible memories.

Kind regards,
James.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for your lovely review and kind comments for my poem for Greg. Much appreciated my dear friend!

reply by Jumbo J on 29-Apr-2023

My pleasure Debi.
I've been away for a little while and maybe back now for three weeks?
How are you going?
You pop into my thoughts every now and again. I wonder how your surgery went and was it successful this time around?
You remain in my healing circle, in my thoughts and prayers dear friend.

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This poem serves as a tribute poem to a brother named Greg. It sounds like the speaker of the poem is used to communicating on her behalf and on behalf of sisters.
Tiniest of suggestions:
We love you Greg, with all our hearts; to us you're ten feet tall
Just add a comma before the name Greg. Also I think I would add a comma or an exclamation mark after tall.

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023

I thank you Crystie! I appreciate your suggestions and will edit right now. Thanks again my dear friend!,

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This is a wonderful and beautiful dedication you have dedicated to your friend. I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing!

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023

Thanks Raul, for the awesome review and kind words for my brother's poem

reply by Raul1 on 24-Apr-2023

You're welcome!