Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I hope being a mere male I may have my say, how very well said and true, I will have to take both sides here or all sides, as I have found that here on FS. everyone is very helpful; I barely knew the alphabet and definitely could not spell it when I started, love the rhyme, the way you kept it for each stanza, and very uplifting message in your poem, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023

Thanks so much for your awesome review, as alway. And I do appreciate your kind words.
My poem does have one flaw, and that is when you do a perfect rhyme, a near rhyme sticks out like a sore thumb. However to talk of my faith was such an important part.
So I will either reword that line or put that thumb in the author's notes for all to see! hehehehehehe! Thanks again my sweet friend!

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

What a sweet tribute! It certainly reflects my short time here at Fanstory. I finally found my tribe. You dug deep into the rest of what goes on here.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023

Hi Nicki! Whether you realize it or not yet, you are truly one of us. Few new people capture our hearts as quickly and sweetly as people like you and Jessica and a few others. So often some come on thinking they know it all and start handing some of the more pro~writers some low ratings and tell them how it should be done, when they haven't a clue. And somehow think they will gain respect that way. You graced us with your sweet smile and showed your intelligence by how respectfully you joined us, and now I'm sure I am not the only one who feels such great respect in return. Just love to give credit back where it is so well deserved! And thank you for such kind comments for my poem honoring all of us girls, my very sweet friend.

reply by Nicki Nance on 17-Mar-2023

Debi, that means the world to me!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

That's a very lovely poem, Debi, and I agree with your sentiments here. We do care for and look after each other on the whole, and offer support and encouragement. You've sait it so well in smooth-flowing rhyming verse. Well done!
Wendy

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

AWWW! And you make it great "Estate" here, Debi! You see all the beauty because it comes from your heart that filters out the things worth ignoring and celebrate the traits that come from the fruit of the Spirit! Thank you for being YOU!

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023

Thank you Helen, my sweetest of sweeeeeetest (now that's a lot of sugar!) but I am keeping it that way because that describes you.
I had to make a change already because a man found a flaw in my poem. Lol, actually it had bothered me a little too to use a near rhyme such as faith, so I did change it to fate. LOL, No worries, but I used it wisely and not as a substitute. Thanks for being my first reviewer, and I am so appreciative of your comments. They meant the world to me. I know there are some that think I sprinkle the sugar a little thick, but I can't help the heart that God gave me. Not sure why I have such a need to be me, but I know He sent me here for a reason, and I'm not about to change the path He put me on. Just wish He would have supplied me with being a little tougher and not hurt so easily. But that too is His way. I just figured it out that is one of the reasons why God gave me you. One sweet word from you, erases a million not so sweet from another.. Honestly! And So Thankful for you!