Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Aw, maybe to an ice cream bar, a Hagen Daz vanilla ice cream bar smothered in deep, dark chocolate and nuts. How sweet of you to care for your loved one's addiction.

Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023

Hahaha Sally, he wouldn't have done the hokey pokey even in his drinking days. Fiction, all fiction! But I needed to have a little fun post for a change.

With you on the Hagen Daz bars. When my mom was dying, she wanted one
Everyday. They are wonderful and so are you!!

Thanks for the sweet review and comments, my sweet friend.

reply by Sally Law on 11-Jan-2023

You are most welcome! My mother-in-law was totally addicted to sweets at the end of her life. She passed from Alzheimer?s. Loved her ice cream and cheese cake! Blessings,
Sal XOs

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Delightful play on words Debi.
And who doesn't like the Hokey Pokey. Brings back lots of memories.
Fun 3 line poem.

Well done
Blessings
Janet

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Hi Janet! Thank you for your fun and kind review and comments for my poem.
I sure appreciate it my friend