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Comment from Ginda Simpson
Yes, it does feel at times that we use our blood for ink, to write the words we are afraid to say aloud. And how beautifully you have expressed this. Well done.
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Yes, it does feel at times that we use our blood for ink, to write the words we are afraid to say aloud. And how beautifully you have expressed this. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
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thank you ginda 😁👍❤️🖋️✨
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A dramatic image which catches the reader's eye and supplements the thought; The change in the colour of the font is also effective! this meets the rules of the contest!
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A dramatic image which catches the reader's eye and supplements the thought; The change in the colour of the font is also effective! this meets the rules of the contest!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
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thank you sarah 😊💙🖊️❤️
Comment from jmdg1954
Nicely penned 3-5-3 poem for the contest.
Passion definition in your entry is an irrational but irresistible motive. Such a strong feeling of belief.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Nicely penned 3-5-3 poem for the contest.
Passion definition in your entry is an irrational but irresistible motive. Such a strong feeling of belief.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
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thank you john 😎❤️🖊️👍
Comment from Jim Wile
A thought-provoking, visually beautiful poem. We don't know if it is the writer's characters that are bleeding the passion, or if it's the writer's own passion that is coming through in his writing. I think probably the latter. Very good job on this short poem.
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A thought-provoking, visually beautiful poem. We don't know if it is the writer's characters that are bleeding the passion, or if it's the writer's own passion that is coming through in his writing. I think probably the latter. Very good job on this short poem.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
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thank you jim 🤔😊❤️🖋️
Comment from Ricky1024
Yes this 3-5-3 writing prompt poem speaks highly when it comes to a writers passion.
Passion to empty the soul.
Release the Hearts Feed.
Snd relinquish the pain to extinguish the flame.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Yes this 3-5-3 writing prompt poem speaks highly when it comes to a writers passion.
Passion to empty the soul.
Release the Hearts Feed.
Snd relinquish the pain to extinguish the flame.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
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thank you ricky 😎❤️🖊️👍
Comment from Sugarray77
I like the way you used color.. black and red... to add drama to your short poem. I also like how you used a writer's passion as your theme because it is so appropriate. Good luck.
Melissa
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I like the way you used color.. black and red... to add drama to your short poem. I also like how you used a writer's passion as your theme because it is so appropriate. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
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thank you melissa 😁💙🖋️✨
Comment from Celyn
This poem sounds good and flows very well. It has the correct number of syllables per line for the 3-5-3 contest and is quite atmospheric in its approach.
Good luck with it
Celyn
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This poem sounds good and flows very well. It has the correct number of syllables per line for the 3-5-3 contest and is quite atmospheric in its approach.
Good luck with it
Celyn
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
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thank you celyn 😎❤️🖊️💗
Comment from Kaiku
This is a very nice entry into the 3-5-3 contest. I had to read it a couple of times not because I didn`t understand it, because I did and felt moved by what you were saying. Nice going. Good luck.
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This is a very nice entry into the 3-5-3 contest. I had to read it a couple of times not because I didn`t understand it, because I did and felt moved by what you were saying. Nice going. Good luck.
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
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cool! thank you kaiku 😎😁👍❤️🖋️✨
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