Our Love
2nd place Love Poem contest60 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
It's wonderful that you feel so positive about your significant other. It's interesting that so many couples just stay together out of habit. My first marriage lasted 32 years. It lasted that long I believe because of our two sons. After 10 years, I am now remarried and thus far we've been together over eight years. I feel as you do about my wife and feel it will just get better. Thank you for the uplifting poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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It's wonderful that you feel so positive about your significant other. It's interesting that so many couples just stay together out of habit. My first marriage lasted 32 years. It lasted that long I believe because of our two sons. After 10 years, I am now remarried and thus far we've been together over eight years. I feel as you do about my wife and feel it will just get better. Thank you for the uplifting poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you victor for your encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you. Interesting, my first marriage lasted 32 years as well. I'm not sure why I stayed together but maybe it was the children and after they left home, there wasn't any reason to stay.
I'm happy to hear that you and your wife are happy and I pray that it will just keep getting better for you as well. It makes life worth living.
Blessings
Janet
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I try not to be late in answering replies, but I?m not always on Fan Story. You left a very nice reply and I appreciate it.?? if life was easy. Everybody could do it.?
Comment from evilynne
This is such a wonderful love poem. The scenes of natural wonders are descriptive and romantic. The author's note is interesting and the picture nicely compliments the work. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
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This is such a wonderful love poem. The scenes of natural wonders are descriptive and romantic. The author's note is interesting and the picture nicely compliments the work. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Evi for your encouraging review and for the special sixth star. I appreciate hearing from you and for your kind words.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme.
A chilly breeze blows through the hills.Your warm embrace shuts out the cold.Together we've been blessed by God.
Our love has grown a hundredfold.Beautiful
Photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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This is a beautifully written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme.
A chilly breeze blows through the hills.Your warm embrace shuts out the cold.Together we've been blessed by God.
Our love has grown a hundredfold.Beautiful
Photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Joanne for your lovely review. I appreciate hearing from you and your kind words.
Blessings
Janet
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Your gorgeous poem brings me to a visit in a land I've never seen. Truly, this is a love poem of nature and of God's blessings, in addition to the one it's dedicated to. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Your gorgeous poem brings me to a visit in a land I've never seen. Truly, this is a love poem of nature and of God's blessings, in addition to the one it's dedicated to. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Vera for your lovely review. I always appreciate hearing from you. Thank you too for the extra special stars.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from harmony13
A beautiful love poem! The author's words are descriptive, meaningful,
lovely and creative. Thank you for the author's notes - yes this kind
of love is a blessing. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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A beautiful love poem! The author's words are descriptive, meaningful,
lovely and creative. Thank you for the author's notes - yes this kind
of love is a blessing. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your lovely review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a reaffirm of the protagonist's love for his beloved wife duly embroidered with an everyday scenery of the characteristic features of their land.
The work highlights the falcon on a breakfast foray; galloping stallions beyond the grand array of pastures; the Moors and peaks; the dynamics of the seasons that dovetail their daily affairs and how it has made their love to grow a hundredfold.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with humanity's affinity towards nature.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a reaffirm of the protagonist's love for his beloved wife duly embroidered with an everyday scenery of the characteristic features of their land.
The work highlights the falcon on a breakfast foray; galloping stallions beyond the grand array of pastures; the Moors and peaks; the dynamics of the seasons that dovetail their daily affairs and how it has made their love to grow a hundredfold.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with humanity's affinity towards nature.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Lloyd for your lovely and detailed review. I appreciate you and your kind remarks.
Blessings
Janet
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Amen! Remain Blessed.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What a great description of a wonderful moment with the one you love without even mentioning your partner until the very end.
One observation:
2nd stanza, 1st sentence: I think "gallops" should be "gallop"
Very soothing, descriptive read, thank you.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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What a great description of a wonderful moment with the one you love without even mentioning your partner until the very end.
One observation:
2nd stanza, 1st sentence: I think "gallops" should be "gallop"
Very soothing, descriptive read, thank you.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Gary for your encouraging review and I greatly appreciate your gentle correction.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this stanza it brings me serenity and an surreal unwinding from the sadness of the day:"
Now here we are at eventide --
tranquility engulfs the night.
In these serene and quiet times --
the love we share is my delight." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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I love this stanza it brings me serenity and an surreal unwinding from the sadness of the day:"
Now here we are at eventide --
tranquility engulfs the night.
In these serene and quiet times --
the love we share is my delight." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Iza for your lovely review. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from amahra
Nicely written poem with a great artwork to match.
A falcon flies at break of dawn.
He soars to greet[s] the morning sun.[take the 's' off of the word greet.
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Nicely written poem with a great artwork to match.
A falcon flies at break of dawn.
He soars to greet[s] the morning sun.[take the 's' off of the word greet.
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you amahra for your lovely review. I always appreciate hearing from you. Thank you too for catching my error. I really appreciate that.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a lovely poem, Janet. The meter and rhyme is well done and I think the message is delightful and interesting. Your trip to England sounds lovely. Shouldn't this be in the non-fiction category? Your Poem is a good one for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Well done and good luck. Nancy:)
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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This is a lovely poem, Janet. The meter and rhyme is well done and I think the message is delightful and interesting. Your trip to England sounds lovely. Shouldn't this be in the non-fiction category? Your Poem is a good one for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Well done and good luck. Nancy:)
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Nancy for your lovely review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
