A God's Will
12 Word One Sentence Spiritual Fiction Contest God's Will53 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an interesting - 12 word one sentence writing prompt. The 'rules' and explanation to this writing prompt are appreciate - albeit long.
The 12 words and 3 necessary inclusions are good. I did ponder the last word though:
God of Heaven will send all war engaged men to Hell tomorrow. -
tomorrow doesn't seen quick enough. How about - immediately - definitely - explicitly - unmistakably?
Just food for thought. Thank you for sharing and best of luck.
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This is an interesting - 12 word one sentence writing prompt. The 'rules' and explanation to this writing prompt are appreciate - albeit long.
The 12 words and 3 necessary inclusions are good. I did ponder the last word though:
God of Heaven will send all war engaged men to Hell tomorrow. -
tomorrow doesn't seen quick enough. How about - immediately - definitely - explicitly - unmistakably?
Just food for thought. Thank you for sharing and best of luck.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from amahra
LOL! Gee, I hope you're wrong about God sending all men engaged in a war to Hell. That would include the innocent ones who are defending their country from invasion. But I think I know what you mean.
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LOL! Gee, I hope you're wrong about God sending all men engaged in a war to Hell. That would include the innocent ones who are defending their country from invasion. But I think I know what you mean.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022