A Personality
12 word one sentence non-fiction: contest: personality66 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your one sentence, twelve word non-fiction provides a sound message for every writer on this site. All published or spoken poetry, fiction, or non-fiction reveals the inner thoughts of the creator. I wish you the best in the contest.
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Your one sentence, twelve word non-fiction provides a sound message for every writer on this site. All published or spoken poetry, fiction, or non-fiction reveals the inner thoughts of the creator. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
It looks like you have covered all the bases in the directions for this twelve word piece. The sentence is also a great observation of the characteristics of life.
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It looks like you have covered all the bases in the directions for this twelve word piece. The sentence is also a great observation of the characteristics of life.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from pome lover
well, that's an awful lot of instructions for a 12 word sentence. But I think you did it. My first reaction, though, when I read it, was why didn't you say wisdom "and" personality, instead of "or"? Just curious.
Katharine
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well, that's an awful lot of instructions for a 12 word sentence. But I think you did it. My first reaction, though, when I read it, was why didn't you say wisdom "and" personality, instead of "or"? Just curious.
Katharine
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from Jay Squires
Whatever you publish, speak or express reveal your status, wisdom or personality. [Reveal should be changed to "reveals" since the subject is "Whatever". Good luck on the contest. With all the restrictions, I'm sure yours will probably be the only entry. Congratulations, though, on following each one of the requirements to a "T".
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Whatever you publish, speak or express reveal your status, wisdom or personality. [Reveal should be changed to "reveals" since the subject is "Whatever". Good luck on the contest. With all the restrictions, I'm sure yours will probably be the only entry. Congratulations, though, on following each one of the requirements to a "T".
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your twelve word sentence. Very creative. The use of the red text to put emphasis on certain words is effective. The artwork you chose is perfect. Your message is a clear one.
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I enjoyed reading your twelve word sentence. Very creative. The use of the red text to put emphasis on certain words is effective. The artwork you chose is perfect. Your message is a clear one.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from Spitfire
Where two or more words are connected by 'and' the sentence takes a plural verb, but if they are connected by 'or', the verb should be singular. Hence, you need to replace 'reveal' with the singular 'reveals'. Other than that, you express a truism with your placement of these words.
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Where two or more words are connected by 'and' the sentence takes a plural verb, but if they are connected by 'or', the verb should be singular. Hence, you need to replace 'reveal' with the singular 'reveals'. Other than that, you express a truism with your placement of these words.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from Shirley McLain
I like your twelve word sentence on personality. As far as I can tell, you followed all the guidelines to the letter. Great job, and good luck in the contest. Shirley
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I like your twelve word sentence on personality. As far as I can tell, you followed all the guidelines to the letter. Great job, and good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-Nice use of colored fonts.
-You have a good topic and description.
-A good message about writing and
sharing your wisdom and personality.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Very nice artwork.
-Nice use of colored fonts.
-You have a good topic and description.
-A good message about writing and
sharing your wisdom and personality.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It is just a case of coming up with the right six words to go with the words that are allowed in this contest. You have added six that sit very well with the others. Well done, it works well! Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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It is just a case of coming up with the right six words to go with the words that are allowed in this contest. You have added six that sit very well with the others. Well done, it works well! Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It is just a case of coming up with the right six words to go with the words that are allowed in this contest. You have added six that sit very well with the others. Well done, it works well! Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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It is just a case of coming up with the right six words to go with the words that are allowed in this contest. You have added six that sit very well with the others. Well done, it works well! Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
