He Will Win
God doesn't make mistakes59 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' He Will Win ' is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Good luck with the contest. Please let me now how you get on? It was a pleasure to read your work.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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' He Will Win ' is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Good luck with the contest. Please let me now how you get on? It was a pleasure to read your work.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Hi Duchess, Thank You for a wonderful review...
I'm so glad you like it...I will...
Comment from Janice Canerdy
When the world is working alive with chaos, fear, and hatred, we may sometimes lose sight of the established Biblical truth described in your eight syllables: He is in control.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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When the world is working alive with chaos, fear, and hatred, we may sometimes lose sight of the established Biblical truth described in your eight syllables: He is in control.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Hi Janice, Amen...even I start to question at times...
but then remember...God never loses...and all that He
does is for a reason...He is in control...
Thank You for a wonderful review...
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very good, Biblical, and a comfort in these trying times. We need all the help He can give us as we pray for peace and watch Putin trying to start and all-out war.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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This is very good, Biblical, and a comfort in these trying times. We need all the help He can give us as we pray for peace and watch Putin trying to start and all-out war.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Carol, I don't know what Putin will try next...
what I do believe...with God everything has a reason...
and we are all in that master plan...He will not lose...
if we believe in Him...we have to trust Him...
Thank You for a wonderful review...
Comment from Janetsue
God's promises always come true. He is continually close to His children. It is a comfort to know He is in charge at all times. Best wishes in the 2-4-2 contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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God's promises always come true. He is continually close to His children. It is a comfort to know He is in charge at all times. Best wishes in the 2-4-2 contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Hi Janet, if we believe in God...
we have to trust Him...we are all in His master plan...
Thank You for a wonderful review...
Comment from Michele Harber
Very good use of the 2-4-2 count. It's difficult to make a strong point or express an emotion in only eight syllables, but you've managed to do both. Your poem offers hope and optimism at a time when both are sorely needed, and the picture is the perfect visualization of your words.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Very good use of the 2-4-2 count. It's difficult to make a strong point or express an emotion in only eight syllables, but you've managed to do both. Your poem offers hope and optimism at a time when both are sorely needed, and the picture is the perfect visualization of your words.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Hi Michele, Thank You so much for a wonderful review...
I'm so glad you like it....
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You?re very welcome.
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smiling...
Comment from tfawcus
This has it in a nutshell. We are God's people, He will not let us fall. It is that belief that keeps us going through the greatest trials in life. A powerful entry to the contest. I hope it does well.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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This has it in a nutshell. We are God's people, He will not let us fall. It is that belief that keeps us going through the greatest trials in life. A powerful entry to the contest. I hope it does well.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Hi Tony, even when I start to second guess Him...
I always remember He is always there for us...and He never loses...or makes mistakes...everything is for a reason...
Thank You for a wonderful review...
Comment from lancellot
While this is a nice poem. I have to say, it is not a general fiction story. And that's where you are currently listing this. As is, this will be disqualified from your contest. Now, if this was a mistake, you can ask/ contact the site admin by email. Give them the title and ask Tom to change this to poetry. Otherwise you would have wasted your post.
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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While this is a nice poem. I have to say, it is not a general fiction story. And that's where you are currently listing this. As is, this will be disqualified from your contest. Now, if this was a mistake, you can ask/ contact the site admin by email. Give them the title and ask Tom to change this to poetry. Otherwise you would have wasted your post.
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank You Lance...I contacted Tom...and Thank You for a wonderful
review...
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your 242 challenge is well done, Mystery Author. Great job with the contest prompt. The image is perfect, and your well thought-out words gave readers much to think about in truth.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Your 242 challenge is well done, Mystery Author. Great job with the contest prompt. The image is perfect, and your well thought-out words gave readers much to think about in truth.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you for a wonderful review...Linda
Comment from jessizero
This is uplifting and encouraging. You did a good job expressing a great deal in very few syllables. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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This is uplifting and encouraging. You did a good job expressing a great deal in very few syllables. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you jessizero for a wonderful review...
and for your best wishes...
