Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your poem. The sentences flow with clarity. I don't see any mistakes. You have good rhyming patterns. Excellent work! I like your poem. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Raul, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for this moving testimony in verse, Roy. And it's a perfect prayer for all of us to recite when we write. All our hope rests in the Lord. Loved these verses of hope and desire to be used of God to show His Light.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Helen, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

You clearly have been blessed in your life to receive a direct and personal visit of God's grace... and been receptive to it with appreciation. You honour this gift through your beautifully expressive poetry.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Jenny, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from damommy

Excellent

There's nothing like the love of God. He gives us everything we need and guides us when we ask for it. He is my refuge times of despair, and my celebration when things are good. Beautifully worded prayer, Roy. It really touched my heart.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Yvonne, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Roy,
I love your poem and the reading from Philippians 4:7
Yes, I know the wonderful feeling, I cannot put it to words.
Thank you for your uplifting part from your poem ---

He saved me from death's dark despair,
replaced it with His grace and care.
He gave me hope when all seemed lost.
Gert

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Gert, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Gert sherwood on 08-Oct-2021

You are most welcome Roy
Gert

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"These words I write....", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Duchess, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 08-Oct-2021

Roy you deserved both.
Bless you and have a great weekend,
the Duchess