Paths flow blind...
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Comment from dellsworthpoet
A poem that would take some concentrated reading to get to the bottom. I do like the format and the general message. The language is well measured and the words succinct.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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A poem that would take some concentrated reading to get to the bottom. I do like the format and the general message. The language is well measured and the words succinct.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks So much for these great comments and a lovely review blessings Roy
Comment from Chrissy710
Wow Roy a compelling poem of questioning ones path in life
I really enjoyed the expert meter and rhyme as this flowed nicely while reading it
Another great Roy poem
Cheers Chris
(Stay warm in SA it is pouring and cold here in Vic
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Wow Roy a compelling poem of questioning ones path in life
I really enjoyed the expert meter and rhyme as this flowed nicely while reading it
Another great Roy poem
Cheers Chris
(Stay warm in SA it is pouring and cold here in Vic
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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It?s doing the same Here Chris, cold and wet. Thanks for this marvellous review and wonderful stars, bless you Roy
Comment from Wendy G
True. He made us. There are no mistakes. We can be encouraged and know that it is only what He thinks of us which matters in the end. We just need to focus on pleasing Him. I enjoyed this thoughtful, meditative piece. Our times are in His hand, we do not need to have cares or worries about our duration on this earth, no matter how winding and twisting the paths. Thanks for making me reflect on this lovely poem.
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True. He made us. There are no mistakes. We can be encouraged and know that it is only what He thinks of us which matters in the end. We just need to focus on pleasing Him. I enjoyed this thoughtful, meditative piece. Our times are in His hand, we do not need to have cares or worries about our duration on this earth, no matter how winding and twisting the paths. Thanks for making me reflect on this lovely poem.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks Wendy for these marvellous comments, and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This was a thoughtful poem. My favorite lines were: While as a child I'm reconciled
all innocence is undefiled.
It helps point out that we as mortals are never as smart as we think we are, such as this line says: This maze, my mind, this shallow sea,/will never know how grows a tree.
I like the emphasis on deciding there is more to life than 'this earth-bound cloak' because of the possibility of divine wisdom.
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This was a thoughtful poem. My favorite lines were: While as a child I'm reconciled
all innocence is undefiled.
It helps point out that we as mortals are never as smart as we think we are, such as this line says: This maze, my mind, this shallow sea,/will never know how grows a tree.
I like the emphasis on deciding there is more to life than 'this earth-bound cloak' because of the possibility of divine wisdom.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks Christie for these marvellous comments, and a great review, blessings Roy