A Sonnet For Anthony
My first Shakespearian Sonnet.56 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautiful sonnet. I'm sorry for the loss of your grandson, I know how devastated you must have been. I believe with all my heart that those we have lost, can look down on us and know what's in our hearts. He read this, I'm positive. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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This is a beautiful sonnet. I'm sorry for the loss of your grandson, I know how devastated you must have been. I believe with all my heart that those we have lost, can look down on us and know what's in our hearts. He read this, I'm positive. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your lovely and caring lines, boohienights.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear amada, you have done an excellent job in writing this, your very first Sonnet! !
I think the very best thing that you have done, is write about someone, that you really loved, because that love, and the fact that he had been a part of your life, shows in the words that you have written.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Dear amada, you have done an excellent job in writing this, your very first Sonnet! !
I think the very best thing that you have done, is write about someone, that you really loved, because that love, and the fact that he had been a part of your life, shows in the words that you have written.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Suzanna.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This is a gorgeous sonnet. I didn't see anywhere in the notes so wanted to ask if it is a true story. It's moving and personal and incredibly authentic.
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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This is a gorgeous sonnet. I didn't see anywhere in the notes so wanted to ask if it is a true story. It's moving and personal and incredibly authentic.
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your gracious commejnts dear poet.
Comment from karenina
I love sonnets too. Knowing how difficult this week has been for you --the anniversary of Anthony's death--I marvel at the depth of emotion and love you've flawlessly woven into this superbly executed Shakespearean Sonnet!
A woman of faith--I am certain he is watching you from on high--positive he has read this over your shoulder as you carefully selected every word and rhyme. I am SO sorry for your grief, Helen...and so blessed to call you a friend!--Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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I love sonnets too. Knowing how difficult this week has been for you --the anniversary of Anthony's death--I marvel at the depth of emotion and love you've flawlessly woven into this superbly executed Shakespearean Sonnet!
A woman of faith--I am certain he is watching you from on high--positive he has read this over your shoulder as you carefully selected every word and rhyme. I am SO sorry for your grief, Helen...and so blessed to call you a friend!--Karenina
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Karenina.
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My prayers are with you...Karenina
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Amada:
First, please let me relay my condolences to you for the loss of your grandson. I cannot even begin to imagine how horrible that must have been - and continues to be. I have never written a sonnet, Shakespearean or any other kind, for that matter, but I appreciate the work it took for you to craft this tribute to Anthony.
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Amada:
First, please let me relay my condolences to you for the loss of your grandson. I cannot even begin to imagine how horrible that must have been - and continues to be. I have never written a sonnet, Shakespearean or any other kind, for that matter, but I appreciate the work it took for you to craft this tribute to Anthony.
Rdfrdmom2
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Rd.
Comment from Bill Schott
This sonnet, For Anthony, has the proper formatting and brings the joy of having such a boy together with the pain of his loss. So happy were finally able to put it together so well.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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This sonnet, For Anthony, has the proper formatting and brings the joy of having such a boy together with the pain of his loss. So happy were finally able to put it together so well.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Bill.