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Comment from Anne Johnston
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"In the past 24 hours, I have regained and recovered
resilience, perseverance, and an undying commitment
to better myself, with the added bonus of giving to others."
Such profound words you have chosen showing that it is up to each one of us to find a way to rise above our circumstances and live in hope.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
    Thank you so much, Anne. This surprise review is just what the doctor ordered, so to speak. I appreciate your kind words. I always try to live up to what I wrote that day, and so far have done so with flying colors. Thank you for the excellent rating and review.
    Have a great day,
    Jesse
reply by Anne Johnston on 05-Mar-2021
    You are very welcome
Comment from Jeff Watkins
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I would give you six stars if they were available. Who was it that said "Physician, heal thyself?" I done forgot, but it's great advice. It takes strength to help the weak. It takes self-confidence to teach self-confidence. It takes self-reliance to teach self-reliance.

It takes strength to admit weakness. We need self-knowledge to teach others to know themselves. Without humility, pride is foolishness.

I am happy for you, Jesse. I know that the day is coming when i will feel helpless and hopeless, but when that happens, I will look to your example for inspiration. Jeff

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
    Thank you, Jeff, for your interesting comments. I agree it does take confidence to teach self-confidence. I am doing fine and hope that you are too. Thank you for your excellent review and rating.
    Jesse
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Self-preservation, reminds the readers that our inner turmoil affects how we care for the rest of the world. Here's hoping all is good with you.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
    Thanks, Bill, for this highly effective synopsis of my poem and how it may relate to many of my readers. I appreciate your good wishes for me.
    Have a great week.
    Jesse
Comment from Boogienights
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I like the spirit and determination that you write about in this poem. You always have to believe in who you are and take care of yourself, this is what will change your life. Thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
    Thanks for your encouragement and gentle advice. I agree that self-reliance is the way to go, no matter what. Believing in oneself is the first step towards changing one's life.
    Have a great week.
    Jesse
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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A life changing realization
Self-preservation
by Jesse James Doty


Hello, Jesse,

It's so important to have hope. We all go through difficult times in our lives but with time most things can be overcome. this poem is very relatable. Well done, my friend.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Hello Gypsy. I am glad this resonated with you. Thanks for the insights and kind words. Your input is much appreciated.
    Take care and have a great weekend.
    Jesse
Comment from Julie Sandy
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Great poem, has a lot of strength think we are all like this at the minute, we must count on ourselves to be strong knowing that it will only get better.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks, Julie, for the kind comments and thoughtful encouragement.
    Have a good weekend.
    Take care,
    Jesse
Comment from karenina
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I celebrate with you! Amazing self realization that you have within you the very best you need to grow, achieve, cope, and hope! I've always looked up to you...I may not say it enough, but I do! Others may support you, but so great to see you now have the courage to say YOU are your own best advocate! This poem reaches me--it will reach many of us!--Karenina

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Wow, what a boost to my morale! I look up to you as well! Your poetry is always outstanding, and your reviews, insightful and meaningful. I love the sound of being my "own best advocate!" I am happy this resonates with you and hope to reach many others as well. This is by far the best review I have received so far!
    Jesse
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Simply wonderful, Jesse!
Your free verse poem resonates with me for I, too, "Never have I doubted that I would hold onto hope" during the most trying times of my life. There haven't been many, but for each one, I have always believed that whatever was happening was for a reason, and that truth and honor would persevere.
I appreciate the paucity of words you have employed in your presentation. Your words are honest and real.
So very pleased that I am home now, and that I was able to read this inspiring verse.

Thank you for sharing!
diane


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Good morning, Diane!
    I am glad that this resonates with you, too. I like your reference to 'truth and honor' persevering the times in your life which were especially challenging.
    Thank you for your kind comments, especially commenting on my honesty and how that comes through when I write.

    It sounds like the roads cleared and you were able to take your grandson back to his own home. I am happy you read and reviewed this piece.

    Have a beautiful weekend!
    Jesse
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Jesse, it is indeed hard times we live in at the moment, but I'm glad to see that you're resilient. Life is short, and a lot of us feel that we're loosing years to what is happening to us all. The more important it is to take solace from our surroundings and our inner strength and never lose hope. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thank you, Ulla, for your comments on the hard times we live in. Yes, they have been a personal challenge for me. My resilience & inner strength have helped me regain my equilibrium. I will remember to never lose hope.
    Have a wonderful weekend.
    Jesse

Comment from Pam (respa)
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-A good image, Jesse,
and it is good to see you.
-You wrote a good poem
about your feelings of how
you cope when the world
seems to be crashing down.
-I am glad you have "regained and
recovered" and feel better about it.
-A very positive ending, too.
-Hope you are doing well. Have
a good weekend.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Good afternoon, Pam. Thanks for the attention to detail and excellent review. It feels nice to be missed, and yes, I am doing as well as can be expected these days.
    Have a great weekend.
    Take care,
    Jesse
reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Feb-2021
    You are very welcome, Jesse, and I am glad things are okay. Have a good evening and week ahead.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    You, too, Pam!
reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks.