Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

This is a really beautiful poem--so touching and descriptive of those eyes you, and others, love to gaze into. I think Helen Keller was right when she described eyes as the "windows to the soul," in this case a loving, wonderful soul.

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021

He certainly is. I was blessed with my sons. Good men. I always said God knew I didn't know what I was doing, so He sent me good material to work with. 8-)

Comment from Polly Dolly

Excellent

What a lovely ode to a son. I hope the son received a copy of this. The eyes are the window to the soul. You've successfully highlighted the special importance of your son's eyes - for healing and loving.

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021

Thank you. I was blessed with my sons. I always said God knew I didn't know what I was doing, so He sent me good material to work with. 8-)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Exceptional

-Nice image and
presentation.
-You did a good job
with the theme of sparkle.
-Your son sounds like someone
who really cares and who you
would like to have take care
of an emergency.
-You not only describe the
color of his eyes, but what
people see in them, too.
-Well done and Happy New Year!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021

Thank you for seeing what I meant. Happy New Year to you and yours.

reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Jan-2021

You are very welcome and thank you for the reply and the New Year wishes, too.