Betrayal
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Comment from aryr
Another amazing continuation chapter Sandra. Boy, Tania does not minces her words when she shouted at Grant and Lorna, at least she calmed a little after Monica's arrival. It was an interesting twist regarding Colin, it is one thing to be a thief but to deliberately steal from Tania, wow. Great job, big hugs, smiles and blessings. Just a tiny suggestion, I think you meant 'finger' on this partial paragraph-'of mud on her fringe.'
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Another amazing continuation chapter Sandra. Boy, Tania does not minces her words when she shouted at Grant and Lorna, at least she calmed a little after Monica's arrival. It was an interesting twist regarding Colin, it is one thing to be a thief but to deliberately steal from Tania, wow. Great job, big hugs, smiles and blessings. Just a tiny suggestion, I think you meant 'finger' on this partial paragraph-'of mud on her fringe.'
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for another of your lovely reviews, Alie, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter. No, it was fringe. That's a part of her hair in the front. Don't you call it that? I'll Google it to check it out. I didn't realise it was a UK word. Thanks again, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra. xx
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You are so welcome Sandra. MMM I have learned something new today and I will google it to find out more.
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You are so welcome Sandra. MMM I have learned something new today and I will google it to find out more.
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Let me know what you find out. It's such a common word here for the front of the hair falling over the forehead. xx
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Okay I have checked it out and I do thing 'bangs' are more popular but I did find a site that talked about fringe and bangs. I have always known them as bangs.
Comment from Mistydawn
Thanks to her friend she may be able to figure out this mess, I hope. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting start to finish. Your characters, their thoughts and actions seem realistic. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thanks to her friend she may be able to figure out this mess, I hope. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting start to finish. Your characters, their thoughts and actions seem realistic. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for another of your lovely reviews, dear Misty, I really appreciate all your comments. I'm delighted you are enjoying my new book. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a very intriguing story with great possibilities for superb episodes. I particularly like the spit and fire that Tania exhibits.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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This is a very intriguing story with great possibilities for superb episodes. I particularly like the spit and fire that Tania exhibits.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Rebecca. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter. I enjoyed writing Tania's part. Lol. Have a lovely week, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Thank you. I will. Same to you!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Sandra, I enjoyed reading this chapter that is very well written with a believable feel. I like how the main character expresses her anger and frustration and then has a friend come over to help her through it. You definitely build an interest to read the next chapter. Bill
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Sandra, I enjoyed reading this chapter that is very well written with a believable feel. I like how the main character expresses her anger and frustration and then has a friend come over to help her through it. You definitely build an interest to read the next chapter. Bill
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Bill, that is such a lovely review. And a big hug for the six shiny stars! I'm so pleased you are enjoying my new book. Sending you a hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Sanku
Oh! the puzzle may be on its way to be solved .The one who had stolen her previous work had apparently got kudos andi cannow guess who that unscrupulous person was...
Waiting for the next.....
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Oh! the puzzle may be on its way to be solved .The one who had stolen her previous work had apparently got kudos andi cannow guess who that unscrupulous person was...
Waiting for the next.....
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Sanku, for reading this part, and the lovely review you've given it. I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. A bit of detective work is on the cards! Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An excellent chapter, Sandra,
that certainly has a lot of emotion.
-Tania has every right to be upset,
indignant, and lots more.
-She is a strong woman who is
going to stand up for herself, and
I like how Lorna is in support of her,
although Grant is also a bit
wary because of his brother.
-I think Lorna will be a good
sounding board and someone who
is going to help get to the bottom of this.
-I imagine it will take some doing for
Tania to prove her case, but she has
Monica on her side, too, and Tania
has already taken steps to protect
her plans and her computer.
-It will be very interesting to see what develops!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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-An excellent chapter, Sandra,
that certainly has a lot of emotion.
-Tania has every right to be upset,
indignant, and lots more.
-She is a strong woman who is
going to stand up for herself, and
I like how Lorna is in support of her,
although Grant is also a bit
wary because of his brother.
-I think Lorna will be a good
sounding board and someone who
is going to help get to the bottom of this.
-I imagine it will take some doing for
Tania to prove her case, but she has
Monica on her side, too, and Tania
has already taken steps to protect
her plans and her computer.
-It will be very interesting to see what develops!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Hi Pam, thank you so much for this lovely review and all the shiny stars. Tania is stronger than she thinks, and that will become clearer as the chapters move foreward. I'm so pleased you like it up to now, the next few chapters will be quite revealing. Lorna and Monica are wise women and can see what isn't right. Thank you again, my dear friend. Much love, Sandra xx
We've had a lovely lunch, and had a lovely cake presented to us as we left the restaurant. Oh, my! How many calories are in this one?? Of course, we have to eat it!! Lol. :)) xx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. I think Tania is a strong woman and Monica is a good friend.
I'm glad you had a good lunch. I would like see pictures of these cakes you are getting! Glad it was a nice afternoon.
Comment from Ben Colder
She turned into a little spit-fire and I don't blame her. Yep, there are thieves just waiting to get your hard work.
I like this story. I must say it is different from some of your others.
Interesting.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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She turned into a little spit-fire and I don't blame her. Yep, there are thieves just waiting to get your hard work.
I like this story. I must say it is different from some of your others.
Interesting.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Chuck, for the six stars. You are the bestest friend. Yes, it is a lot different to any of my other books, it's a bit of a challenge for me to get out of my comfort zone. We'll see how it goes. I'm so pleased you like it. Lots of love, dear friend. :)) Sandy. xxx