Chip's Poetry
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Comment from amada
This is a stoner...i mean the descriptive words, the picture all inblack and white, al the elements present an image of doom. This is very well written and published. It was a pleasure to read. i am out of a six!
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This is a stoner...i mean the descriptive words, the picture all inblack and white, al the elements present an image of doom. This is very well written and published. It was a pleasure to read. i am out of a six!
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Many thanks, amada!
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-word poem, Four Seconds, has the half dozen required words and notes that the shortcut from the bridge saves time, if not lives.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This six-word poem, Four Seconds, has the half dozen required words and notes that the shortcut from the bridge saves time, if not lives.
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Well played, Bill. Thanks!