Fantastical Reflections
It happened just like that... once upon a time48 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
Ahhhhhh. Such a lovely 'faery' tale. So sweet and tender. I wish I had a sixer for this lovely entry for the story in a poem. I wish you luck in the contest, but I don't think you'll need it :)
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
Ahhhhhh. Such a lovely 'faery' tale. So sweet and tender. I wish I had a sixer for this lovely entry for the story in a poem. I wish you luck in the contest, but I don't think you'll need it :)
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Marcia, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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I did enjoy it very much :) Take care and stay well :)
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, this reminds me of your fairy character and I guess your pen is warming up to regale us some more about that love story. Either that or, you're really a fairy and this story is about you and your hubby.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
Oh, this reminds me of your fairy character and I guess your pen is warming up to regale us some more about that love story. Either that or, you're really a fairy and this story is about you and your hubby.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Can't wait to get back to all of them... just as soon as I just 'do nuthin' for a few days - lol! ;) Thank you so much, Helen, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Oh my! how romantic your muse has turned. But this makes a fine story. Your mighty rhymer has not deserted you, so this one should do just fine in this contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
Oh my! how romantic your muse has turned. But this makes a fine story. Your mighty rhymer has not deserted you, so this one should do just fine in this contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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LOL!! :) Thank you so much, Suzanna, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Kenia Suarez
A very nicely written poem. It is about an innocent and young love, the type you never forget. I think it has a nice flow, no typos, and good choice of words.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
A very nicely written poem. It is about an innocent and young love, the type you never forget. I think it has a nice flow, no typos, and good choice of words.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for stopping in for the review on this one - be sure to drop in again some time!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Lucy de Welles
So heart warming. Draws a tear. Touches the place of longing in each of us. Author must be lucky in love. How envious some readers will be. Unless it's just a fantasy and then we will all dream together. Of youth and one in a million opportunity :). Photo and text match well and colors are lovely. Wouldn't change a thing.
Thank you so much for lifting my spirits tonight.
Well done!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
So heart warming. Draws a tear. Touches the place of longing in each of us. Author must be lucky in love. How envious some readers will be. Unless it's just a fantasy and then we will all dream together. Of youth and one in a million opportunity :). Photo and text match well and colors are lovely. Wouldn't change a thing.
Thank you so much for lifting my spirits tonight.
Well done!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Lucy, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Let's all dream together... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from lauralumummu
What a lovely romantic memory. Lasting love! The beginning was so enchanting and is what inspires us, in the hard years. I still love mine too. Very well written and thank you for brightening my day. ox, Laura
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
What a lovely romantic memory. Lasting love! The beginning was so enchanting and is what inspires us, in the hard years. I still love mine too. Very well written and thank you for brightening my day. ox, Laura
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Laura, for your awesome review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land -- those will hopefully light the way there - lol! :) Glad to hear you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a romantic story of falling and love and enjoying the journey together. Nicely composed and rhymed. Illustrated beautifully, too. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 11-May-2020
This is a romantic story of falling and love and enjoying the journey together. Nicely composed and rhymed. Illustrated beautifully, too. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Marilyn, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from richie b
Yvette,
Your poem is clean and natural. No bumps or missteps.
Your rhyming smooth allowing the reader to imagine
and contemplate.
A beautiful love poem that leaves the reader feeling
light and refreshed with their own memories.
Blessings,
Richie
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reply by the author on 11-May-2020
Yvette,
Your poem is clean and natural. No bumps or missteps.
Your rhyming smooth allowing the reader to imagine
and contemplate.
A beautiful love poem that leaves the reader feeling
light and refreshed with their own memories.
Blessings,
Richie
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Richie, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) So glad you could find some happy memories here -- take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, sir!! ;) Yvette