A Strange Garment!
Acknowledging the Strange Garment we wear in life!76 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This poem covers all the contest has asked for, and more! It's an amazing poem, with so much emotion in it, that whoever reads it, knows immediately it comes from the author's heart. The thoughts and feelings are something I can relate to. Well done, and good luck in the contest!! :)) Sandra xxx ps. That's a stunning picture!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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This poem covers all the contest has asked for, and more! It's an amazing poem, with so much emotion in it, that whoever reads it, knows immediately it comes from the author's heart. The thoughts and feelings are something I can relate to. Well done, and good luck in the contest!! :)) Sandra xxx ps. That's a stunning picture!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Sandra! It's great hearing from you again. Thanks for the "Excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work." Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Anonymous.
Comment from lyenochka
You're right that our earthly garment / tent is indeed strange as it doesn't really reflect all that is in our souls and hearts as you so eloquently stated. Only in heaven, will our true selves/souls be revealed.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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You're right that our earthly garment / tent is indeed strange as it doesn't really reflect all that is in our souls and hearts as you so eloquently stated. Only in heaven, will our true selves/souls be revealed.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," my dear friend! Great hearing from you. Thanks for the awesome review and kind words. I reviewed your profile "about". Quite a commendable track record. Best wishes for a great weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is hard to embrace death in such a way because we all love life so much that we do not want it to end and this is the selfish nature of human life I expect. We also fear death as we know it is final because we have seen things die and people die. Your words here are food for thought and poignant, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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It is hard to embrace death in such a way because we all love life so much that we do not want it to end and this is the selfish nature of human life I expect. We also fear death as we know it is final because we have seen things die and people die. Your words here are food for thought and poignant, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Dolly! Great hearing from you, my dear friend. Thanks for the Excellent review and kind words. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Anonymous.
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderfully written poem, I love your stanzas of mono rhyme, yes we do all play roles and alter our appearance to suite, an excellent presentation and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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What a wonderfully written poem, I love your stanzas of mono rhyme, yes we do all play roles and alter our appearance to suite, an excellent presentation and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," my dear friend! Thanks for the excellent review and God Bless.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author of the beautiful free verse to a lady with sliver hair being praised with beautiful admiring words--
You are pure gold with angel wings, and I'm sure your love will hold.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hello author of the beautiful free verse to a lady with sliver hair being praised with beautiful admiring words--
You are pure gold with angel wings, and I'm sure your love will hold.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.
Gert
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Gert! God Bless.
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You are welcom and a SALUTE to you.
Comment from samandlancelot
I love your rhyme and meter and the beauty in your words. I'm just not quite sure about your story. Is this a friend, a partner, a person you see as an angel, your guardian angel?
Either way, time and separation will not take away God's gifts. And that is the beauty in your poem.
Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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I love your rhyme and meter and the beauty in your words. I'm just not quite sure about your story. Is this a friend, a partner, a person you see as an angel, your guardian angel?
Either way, time and separation will not take away God's gifts. And that is the beauty in your poem.
Patricia
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Patricia! Thanks for the excellent review and God Bless.
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
A very beautiful poem. I thought your subject, though a bit strange, was picked for a purpose only you know. You rhymes and rhythm was well executed, and your art work was perfect for the piece.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A very beautiful poem. I thought your subject, though a bit strange, was picked for a purpose only you know. You rhymes and rhythm was well executed, and your art work was perfect for the piece.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," for the excellent review, my dear friend and God Bless.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
What a WONDERFUL piece of Spiritual Poetry this is!
Impressive as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth, spontaneous, and ENCHANTING flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
It TRANSPARENTLY depicts the heart-touching theme.
The last Stanza, moreover, its 1st two lines are particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
SUPERB.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hello Friend,
What a WONDERFUL piece of Spiritual Poetry this is!
Impressive as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth, spontaneous, and ENCHANTING flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
It TRANSPARENTLY depicts the heart-touching theme.
The last Stanza, moreover, its 1st two lines are particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
SUPERB.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "DOUBLE SALUTE," RP!
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Friend, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP.
Comment from J.R. Preston
What a sweet and beautiful poem. It is one of comfort and trust as well as going into the unknown. I enjoyed it very much. Best of luck in the contest, I hope you do well.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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What a sweet and beautiful poem. It is one of comfort and trust as well as going into the unknown. I enjoyed it very much. Best of luck in the contest, I hope you do well.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," J.R.!
Comment from Ross E Silke
A very passionate and tearful poem that speaks of sadness mixed with other emotions that can be felt and sensed well. A good solid contest entry. I like the images and can feel the tears.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A very passionate and tearful poem that speaks of sadness mixed with other emotions that can be felt and sensed well. A good solid contest entry. I like the images and can feel the tears.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Ross!