One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Alchera
Well written throughout its fitted and set syllables counting structural format and its life's fatal madness of its character.aA good work indeed!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Well written throughout its fitted and set syllables counting structural format and its life's fatal madness of its character.aA good work indeed!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much
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Welcome!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
You've captured the essence of your review and exploration of the Joker's character so well in those three lines. Well done. It sounds like a fascinating picture.
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You've captured the essence of your review and exploration of the Joker's character so well in those three lines. Well done. It sounds like a fascinating picture.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the review
Comment from Boogienights
This was chilling. I've seen the movie but if I hadn't and just saw this trailer, I would be excited to see it. I'm a horror movie fan and this caught my attention. While more psychological than horror its still worth seeing.
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This was chilling. I've seen the movie but if I hadn't and just saw this trailer, I would be excited to see it. I'm a horror movie fan and this caught my attention. While more psychological than horror its still worth seeing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
I'm a horror fan too :)
Thank you for the review
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is outstanding. Each word has been carefully chosen to create the perfect whole effect. Therefore, the question arises to know whether "innocense" (rather than innocence) was a deliberate choice, or a slip of the pen.
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This is outstanding. Each word has been carefully chosen to create the perfect whole effect. Therefore, the question arises to know whether "innocense" (rather than innocence) was a deliberate choice, or a slip of the pen.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the outstanding review and six stars. I meant to type innocence.
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
A riveting poetic commentary on the darkness tucked away in one's mind. We all have these spaces, but not all are so well expressed as are your words.The clown image resonates with the movie description you included. Good luck in this contest... ...ec
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A riveting poetic commentary on the darkness tucked away in one's mind. We all have these spaces, but not all are so well expressed as are your words.The clown image resonates with the movie description you included. Good luck in this contest... ...ec
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Elaine.
Comment from Tami Urbanek
I like your poem and the representation of the Joker. In darkness/madness, it does make sense that innocence whimpers. Thank you for sharing the back story-I have not yet seen The Joker. Good luck in the contest!
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I like your poem and the representation of the Joker. In darkness/madness, it does make sense that innocence whimpers. Thank you for sharing the back story-I have not yet seen The Joker. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Tami. I appreciate your kind review and excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the movie contest.
The joker has been interpreted in many different ways over the years,
as someone suffering from depression it certainly casts a different
shade over the character.
Phoenix won the award for a memorable performance.
Excellent description in your poem.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the movie contest.
The joker has been interpreted in many different ways over the years,
as someone suffering from depression it certainly casts a different
shade over the character.
Phoenix won the award for a memorable performance.
Excellent description in your poem.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your kind review and excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Gideon300
Lol. I keep that puppy on a tight leash! Innocence is skipping and playing all over the place. Very creative poem about the boogeyman in your mind. Good luck with the contest. This one should be a contender.
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Lol. I keep that puppy on a tight leash! Innocence is skipping and playing all over the place. Very creative poem about the boogeyman in your mind. Good luck with the contest. This one should be a contender.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Gideon. I appreciate your kind review and excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
So many scars of childhood determine behavior and attitude in adulthood... A wonderful 5-7-5 for The Joker! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
innocense whimpers --> innocence whimpers
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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So many scars of childhood determine behavior and attitude in adulthood... A wonderful 5-7-5 for The Joker! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
innocense whimpers --> innocence whimpers
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you, YM Roger. I appreciate your kind review and excellent review.
I don't understand the edit, you typed the same twice
Gypsy
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Not the same... yours (on the left) is misspelled.... the correction is on the right. ;) Take care! ;) ;)
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oh! Thank you :)