Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

This is a great poem. You've presented it excellently with embedded images {thumbs up}.

If this was mine, I'd have looked at editing the two pictures so they were of equal size. That would bring a symmetry that is maybe more pleasing to the eye. But that's just my personal preference.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from Ogden

Excellent

Apparently written by a man of few words. I don't disagree with what you have written, because I don't have the foggiest idea of what you intend your poem to mean. More words might help.

(I seldom give fewer than five stars,
because criticism, not stars, can be helpful when the work is not up to par.)

Ogden

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019

Thanks for the comments.

reply by Ogden on 19-Oct-2019

You're welcome. I hope they help.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

The contrast between Heaven and Hell is so striking in your words and the photo. May your weekend be blessed.
Patricia

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a chilling write! Or should I say a fiery truth here! I am hoping that those pearly gates are open when I get their, falling to hell would not be desired, their is a scary truth to these words, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019

Thank you for the comments. Yes it is a sobering reality.