Chip's Poetry
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables to provide a meaningful, appealing definition of "poems." Your metaphor is descriptive and lovely,
and the artwork is engaging.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables to provide a meaningful, appealing definition of "poems." Your metaphor is descriptive and lovely,
and the artwork is engaging.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thanks, Janice.
Comment from C T Curtis
Very well-done with so few allowed words and syllables. And full of depth and meaning. I love it. We see and FEEL beyond the words. I feel this is a really great job!
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Very well-done with so few allowed words and syllables. And full of depth and meaning. I love it. We see and FEEL beyond the words. I feel this is a really great job!
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thanks, CT!
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Love the imagery and concept written here. Prisms alter our perceptions of reality, just as poetry can. Great fifteen syllable poem. Perfect picture to go with it. Excellent. Hugh
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Love the imagery and concept written here. Prisms alter our perceptions of reality, just as poetry can. Great fifteen syllable poem. Perfect picture to go with it. Excellent. Hugh
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you, Hugh!
Comment from James W. Reynolds
Nice work. I like the pairing of poem with prisms. It is not cliché. It also symbolizes the many colors found in poetry. How words are give a depth of meaning. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Nice work. I like the pairing of poem with prisms. It is not cliché. It also symbolizes the many colors found in poetry. How words are give a depth of meaning. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thanks, James!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one
continuous thought.
-Effective alliteration with
the '-p' and '-w' sounds.
-I like the image of
prisms to describe poems,
as well as the concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one
continuous thought.
-Effective alliteration with
the '-p' and '-w' sounds.
-I like the image of
prisms to describe poems,
as well as the concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you, Pam!
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You are welcome.
Comment from zanya
Yes poetry is indeed a 'prism' - enabling us to escape the mundane everyday - at least for a while- allowing us precious moments to ponder- thanks for reminding us of that !
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Yes poetry is indeed a 'prism' - enabling us to escape the mundane everyday - at least for a while- allowing us precious moments to ponder- thanks for reminding us of that !
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Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you, Zanya!