Comment from Tootsie55

Excellent

Well done. Great poem and I loved the layout and the picture as well. Missing your Novel hurry back to it. No spags, good story within the poem as well. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019

Thanks, Tootsie. I'm anticipating that this might be my last poem for a while. As you say - it's time I got back into the novel!

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

that is a peaceful and joyful feeling you are describing, Tony. day is done, night is falling, I can hear my dreams calling. something like that............meeshu

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019

Many thanks, Meeshu. I appreciate your comments about the atmospherics of this poem. All the best, Tony

Comment from Randa Dayle

Excellent

Very nice poem and the picture your fixed went along very well with your poem, to me that makes it complete. I love the whole feel, and the words. Good job!

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019

Thanks, Randa. I appreciate your comments. All the best, Tony