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Comment from Iza Deleanu
God is the Alpha and Omega, the beginning and the end as it well comes out from the last stanza;"Wondrous purposes, and secrets of God's Creations are unclear to man
Only, God creates everything first, but when, how, and why, is unclear
Really, God has different powers to different devotees as per His names
Deems God creates man in the same design, shape, and structure ever
Seems God never changes His plan, mode, and type of Creations"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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God is the Alpha and Omega, the beginning and the end as it well comes out from the last stanza;"Wondrous purposes, and secrets of God's Creations are unclear to man
Only, God creates everything first, but when, how, and why, is unclear
Really, God has different powers to different devotees as per His names
Deems God creates man in the same design, shape, and structure ever
Seems God never changes His plan, mode, and type of Creations"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I don't know if I've ever seen an acrostic for an entire sentence before. Ambitious! And asking the big questions. Why does God act the way he does?
I find it interesting that the first recorded prayer in the prayer came from a murderer and a liar (Cain) and he basically asked God, "What do you think you're doing?" (when he complained, "my punishment is more than I can bear.") God has always accepted honest questions.
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I don't know if I've ever seen an acrostic for an entire sentence before. Ambitious! And asking the big questions. Why does God act the way he does?
I find it interesting that the first recorded prayer in the prayer came from a murderer and a liar (Cain) and he basically asked God, "What do you think you're doing?" (when he complained, "my punishment is more than I can bear.") God has always accepted honest questions.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
Comment from Ulla
Hi there. An interesting poem that said a lot and certainly gave food for thought. You have an infallible belief that I can only admire. I wish you all the best in the contest. Ulla:)
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Hi there. An interesting poem that said a lot and certainly gave food for thought. You have an infallible belief that I can only admire. I wish you all the best in the contest. Ulla:)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Alcreator,
This is an interesting Acrostic poem with deep feeling and meaning. It also brings to light your personal thoughts and as a result, is quite thought provoking.
My best in the contest,
Deborah
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Dear Alcreator,
This is an interesting Acrostic poem with deep feeling and meaning. It also brings to light your personal thoughts and as a result, is quite thought provoking.
My best in the contest,
Deborah
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is excellent. It gives the reader a lot to think about. Sometimes, the only thing you can say is God's ways are not our ways. For example, there are things we care about that God doesn't care about. God doesn't care if you win the Lottery. God leaves the punishment of criminals to mankind. "Because judgment against evildoers is not executed speedily, therefore it is fully set in the heart of men to do evil."
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This is excellent. It gives the reader a lot to think about. Sometimes, the only thing you can say is God's ways are not our ways. For example, there are things we care about that God doesn't care about. God doesn't care if you win the Lottery. God leaves the punishment of criminals to mankind. "Because judgment against evildoers is not executed speedily, therefore it is fully set in the heart of men to do evil."
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from estory
I thought it was a very interesting poem, interesting in its philosophy, and in its structural elements. In this poem, which reads very much like prose poetry, you create a subtle music out of repetitions of the word God, repetitions of phrases, and also a fragmented vision of the divine. We see God in all kinds of places, people thinking of God in all kinds of ways, asking why they are suffering, why they can't see God, why does God allow evil to happen. It really makes one think. Of course faith is the key to a relationship with God. Whenever Jesus did a miracle, he said "Your faith has made you well." And God causes it to rain on the just and unjust, desiring all to come to repetence, and know him. estory
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I thought it was a very interesting poem, interesting in its philosophy, and in its structural elements. In this poem, which reads very much like prose poetry, you create a subtle music out of repetitions of the word God, repetitions of phrases, and also a fragmented vision of the divine. We see God in all kinds of places, people thinking of God in all kinds of ways, asking why they are suffering, why they can't see God, why does God allow evil to happen. It really makes one think. Of course faith is the key to a relationship with God. Whenever Jesus did a miracle, he said "Your faith has made you well." And God causes it to rain on the just and unjust, desiring all to come to repetence, and know him. estory
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
A very clever and well constructed acrostic but, at least to me, a little confusing at times. Enjoyed reading it and wish you good fortune in the contest.
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A very clever and well constructed acrostic but, at least to me, a little confusing at times. Enjoyed reading it and wish you good fortune in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done acrostic about trying to live by God's/Jesus' words. I don't thing you need the ME lines. It makes the sentence/title grammatically incorrect. I don't think anyone sees God. They may hear him and see manifestations. I think the Bible says no one sees God and lives.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Joan
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This is a well done acrostic about trying to live by God's/Jesus' words. I don't thing you need the ME lines. It makes the sentence/title grammatically incorrect. I don't think anyone sees God. They may hear him and see manifestations. I think the Bible says no one sees God and lives.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Karen Luciana
Good Morning, Alcreator,
I am enjoying your work on this site. Good luck in the contest, This is a well developed and well-written poem. The first line is catchy in its rhyme. The third verse has great meaning for me. I have a question. By knottily, did you mean naughtily? Keep posting, and thank you for another good read.
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Good Morning, Alcreator,
I am enjoying your work on this site. Good luck in the contest, This is a well developed and well-written poem. The first line is catchy in its rhyme. The third verse has great meaning for me. I have a question. By knottily, did you mean naughtily? Keep posting, and thank you for another good read.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Lovely piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, and beautifully depicting in detail 'about God's words' as well as 'people's words about God'.
Impressive, and matching the theme wording.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
[If you don't mind, please see the 5th stanza: CLARIF(Y). Is it ok?]
Best of Luck!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Lovely piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, and beautifully depicting in detail 'about God's words' as well as 'people's words about God'.
Impressive, and matching the theme wording.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
[If you don't mind, please see the 5th stanza: CLARIF(Y). Is it ok?]
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019