Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

The wind, with nostrils flared, kicks off its trace,
and weaker leaves are wrenched from flailing trees
They whirl around, with flurries giving chase,
As towering clouds lift up the whitecap seas.....beautiful whether your rhymes slant or supplant...my favorite word is sussurate
God bless

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks, Jenny. This is another one that came out of Jim's course. All the best, Tony

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks, Jenny. This is another one that came out of Jim's course. All the best, Tony

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Tony,

A treat to get a poem from you. I was expecting another chapter in the book.

I never heard of Mamaragan - I'm not Australian, but he sounds very interesting and a great way to explain thunder and lightning. I think every civilization has its own form of mythology to make sense of the world.

Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks, Patty. I'm struggling a bit with the next chapter. It may take another day or two. Tony

reply by Mustang Patty on 12-Feb-2019

I can wait