haiku (snowflakes fall)
haiku51 total reviews
Comment from WildWithWords
A really lovely Haiku piece which does indeed have that "aha" moment in line 3.
Good choice of picture to match a very nice effort. Well done.
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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A really lovely Haiku piece which does indeed have that "aha" moment in line 3.
Good choice of picture to match a very nice effort. Well done.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you Bill for your encouraging review and kind comments
Blessings
Janet
Comment from rhonnie69
SEASON'S GREETING JMF4119: I like your posting here in that it is brief, clear, and to the point. With just three lines and just a few words you express a complete picture that you have posted here. This is good. Thank you for sharing. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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SEASON'S GREETING JMF4119: I like your posting here in that it is brief, clear, and to the point. With just three lines and just a few words you express a complete picture that you have posted here. This is good. Thank you for sharing. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Rhonnie for your encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
blessings
Janet
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, JM, with your haiku contest entry, I enjoyed reading it. Good job on the style of haiku. I like your satori as it makes readers think of the beauty winter helps prepare the earth for in spring. Thanks for sharing, Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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You did a great job, JM, with your haiku contest entry, I enjoyed reading it. Good job on the style of haiku. I like your satori as it makes readers think of the beauty winter helps prepare the earth for in spring. Thanks for sharing, Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Jan for your encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent haiku, with a splendid haiku line. I've always thought that winter is a resting time, were fallow fields hibernate and rejuvenate in reparation fo the Spring, like Christ, three days in repose to ride again. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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This is an excellent haiku, with a splendid haiku line. I've always thought that winter is a resting time, were fallow fields hibernate and rejuvenate in reparation fo the Spring, like Christ, three days in repose to ride again. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Roy for your encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your thoughtful comments and the Christ and 3 day analogy.
blessings and have a great day my friend.
Janet
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Well done Janet
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice picture and presentation for this poem and snow falls slowly to blanket the ground covering the flowers maybe they will grow back again.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Nice picture and presentation for this poem and snow falls slowly to blanket the ground covering the flowers maybe they will grow back again.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
blessings
Janet
Comment from Joy Graham
Oh yes, you have a great aha moment with, "flower bed" and, "sleeping beauties". I love a good aha moment, and you came through :) I can't comment on any of the haiku rules, because I'm still learning them. Best wishes in the contest. I think this is a terrific entry.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Oh yes, you have a great aha moment with, "flower bed" and, "sleeping beauties". I love a good aha moment, and you came through :) I can't comment on any of the haiku rules, because I'm still learning them. Best wishes in the contest. I think this is a terrific entry.
Joy xx
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Joy for your encouraging review. I always appreciate your comments.
blessings
Janet
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was brilliant, Janet! That had everything, and I loved the final line, sleeping beauties. That was inspirational. I like the photo you chose, it mated well with your lovely haiku. Good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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That was brilliant, Janet! That had everything, and I loved the final line, sleeping beauties. That was inspirational. I like the photo you chose, it mated well with your lovely haiku. Good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Sandra for your encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from your. The picture is of my garden in the back yard.
blessings
Janet
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Beautiful! Your Haiku finds joy in both summer/fall and winter. This inspires the reader to appreciate the cold season that, in different regions, can be harsh and very long.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Beautiful! Your Haiku finds joy in both summer/fall and winter. This inspires the reader to appreciate the cold season that, in different regions, can be harsh and very long.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Donka for your encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
blessings
Janet
Comment from Jaye Bennett
How lovely. I like the "yesterday's flower bed." I also like the "sleeping beauties." I've always said a haiku needed a noun, a verb, and a time. Of course, it should also be about nature. You have done all of that, and so beautifully. Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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How lovely. I like the "yesterday's flower bed." I also like the "sleeping beauties." I've always said a haiku needed a noun, a verb, and a time. Of course, it should also be about nature. You have done all of that, and so beautifully. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Jaye for your encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments. I think you are right about the noun, verb and a time. And nature or a season is a must.
blessings
Janet
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such sweet words and remembrances of those flower beds in spring and summer, and now asleep under the snowy white, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Such sweet words and remembrances of those flower beds in spring and summer, and now asleep under the snowy white, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you Dolly for your encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good luck wishes.
blessings
Janet