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Mother's Life

musings on mommyish chores ... a free verse

58 total reviews 
Comment from c_lucas
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A mother has the strength of a superwoman fulfilling the needs of her family. There of stories many episodes proving the above statement. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a lot for the warm, five star review. So sorry, it took me six years to respond.
Comment from kiwisteveh
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I have to chuckle at the Mom in your picture who still manages to look well-dressed and well-groomed despite her multifarious tasks!

Yes, it's true what you write, although in this day and age, with many working mothers, many of the jobs fall to the aDad as well.

Nice.

Steve

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a lot Steve for resonating with the message of the poem and the five stars too. So sorry, it took me six years to respond.
reply by kiwisteveh on 23-Aug-2024
    Welcome back!
Comment from Rickie1
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Nassus

Mothers are the CEO & COO of the family. They do everything, they just don'tget the same executive pay. They do get the satisfaction of doing the job right something many executives never do. A mother is the core of society, no has a more important role. Well written. Be proud.

Rickie

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a lot Rickie for the warm, five star review. So sorry, it took me six years to respond.
Comment from Sugarray77
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I love this one!! So apt and well described. I like your list of all sorts of thankless jobs that go with the term.. mother, but she doesn't mind. She is in it for love. Great presentation with colorful art. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a lot Melissa for the warm, five star review. So sorry, it took me years to respond.
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Susan, been there...done it all...LOL...
and then they leave home...and you keep doing it out of routine...LOL...I love your fun poem sweet girl...and love this picture...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a lot Linda for the warm, five star review. So sorry, it took me six years to respond.
reply by l.raven on 25-Aug-2024
    Hi Susan, this was one of my favorite poems of yours...it hit home...LOL...
    missed you girl...and so glad to see
    you...😁😁and you are sooooo
    welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Galactia
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Hi lol, what a great little poem. Here I have writers block and you whip up a poem about mothers and our endless household chores.

Great job
Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a lot Tia for the warm, five star review. So sorry, it took me six years to respond.
Comment from Connie Frazier
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Love it! I like how it starts with explaining that a mother is a collection. Mother may be a singular noun, but is more accurately a plural entity. I agree with your analysis. The poem reads easily and is a very apt definition of being a mom. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a lot for the perceptive, five star review. So sorry, it took me six years to respond.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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It's fun but it sounds also as facts. A mother can be anything where she is needed. I enjoyed the simple and amusing words and the light hearted mood.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a lot for warm, five star review. So sorry, it took me six years to respond.
Comment from meeshu
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This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. Very well penned, Susan. Moms all over the world are going to love this one. it is clever and very accurate..

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a lot meeshu for the warm, five star review. So sorry, it took me six years to respond.
Comment from harmony13
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are descriptive, humorous, and
creative. The reader thought all things listed are a part of motherhood!
The poem made me smile. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem well.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
    Thanks a bunch for the five star review. So sorry, it took me six years to respond.