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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Once Upon Cary Grant"A collection of award winning poems
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Comment from royowen
I thought immediately that they were quite obviously film titles, so you've done very well indeed, I didn't consider for a minute that the rhymes were forced nor the rhythm stilted, I was just engrossed in its progression. Well done, most enjoyable, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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I thought immediately that they were quite obviously film titles, so you've done very well indeed, I didn't consider for a minute that the rhymes were forced nor the rhythm stilted, I was just engrossed in its progression. Well done, most enjoyable, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thank you Roy, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very clever write... I marvel at your ability and talent to pull this together. The good flow and imaginative theme help keep the reader interested. Good write. All the best.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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This is a very clever write... I marvel at your ability and talent to pull this together. The good flow and imaginative theme help keep the reader interested. Good write. All the best.
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Marc Grimaldi
I hope this has not been your experience...the cheating wife. I don't have a lot of knowledge of Cary Grant's personal life. His fame dwindled down by my era. Anyway, well written overall. A ruined life by a cheating wife!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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I hope this has not been your experience...the cheating wife. I don't have a lot of knowledge of Cary Grant's personal life. His fame dwindled down by my era. Anyway, well written overall. A ruined life by a cheating wife!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Ulla
Absolutely, anonymous writer. Who cares about meter when it reads well and it's all for fun. Not that I have a clue about meter, anyway. But it is refreshing to read a poem that comes straight from the heart. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Absolutely, anonymous writer. Who cares about meter when it reads well and it's all for fun. Not that I have a clue about meter, anyway. But it is refreshing to read a poem that comes straight from the heart. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thank you Ulla. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Mastery
Good job, author. I see you have quite a memory for Grant's movies. I personally liked " An Affair to Remember" with he and Deborah Kerr. What a tearjerker that was. Need the kleenex for watching.
Good entry for the contest, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Good job, author. I see you have quite a memory for Grant's movies. I personally liked " An Affair to Remember" with he and Deborah Kerr. What a tearjerker that was. Need the kleenex for watching.
Good entry for the contest, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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My personal favorite is Topper. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work Bob.
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Anytime. :)
Comment from l.d.lauritzen
Very clever. Liked the way you worked in the titles and the pacing also turned out to be very good. Was this contest one found on this site or a different one? Nice job. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Very clever. Liked the way you worked in the titles and the pacing also turned out to be very good. Was this contest one found on this site or a different one? Nice job. Keep writing.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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It was on this site. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cary Grant movie title poem/story. I think it is truly the best one I have read so far, and it all make quite good sense and the stoy flows fluently and the titles are a perfect match each time.
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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A very well-written Cary Grant movie title poem/story. I think it is truly the best one I have read so far, and it all make quite good sense and the stoy flows fluently and the titles are a perfect match each time.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thank you Sandra. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.