I Always Thought
Loop Poetry Contest Submission43 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
You have done such a wonderful job here....a clean write with such emotion and fitting rhythm that it truly pulls the reader through your living reflections and leaves them with the same hope along with you! A truly great loop! ;) ;)
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You have done such a wonderful job here....a clean write with such emotion and fitting rhythm that it truly pulls the reader through your living reflections and leaves them with the same hope along with you! A truly great loop! ;) ;)
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written loop poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and I love the art work you used for the imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written loop poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and I love the art work you used for the imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
Comment from Liz O'Neill
To me, this loop poetry is difficult, although the circle and spiral of life are very important. Your grieving and longing bring them into focus. There is a loop, a circle whose ways we must follow. But I sense the spiral is out of balance for you right now. I send you healing and the ability to let to go at your own rate. This is very poignant. It becomes a universal poem where the reader is invited to review and honor their losses. This is a beautiful tribute to your father's journey. I always find writing to be healing. I hope the reader, you and I have healed a little bit through this poem. Thank you.
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To me, this loop poetry is difficult, although the circle and spiral of life are very important. Your grieving and longing bring them into focus. There is a loop, a circle whose ways we must follow. But I sense the spiral is out of balance for you right now. I send you healing and the ability to let to go at your own rate. This is very poignant. It becomes a universal poem where the reader is invited to review and honor their losses. This is a beautiful tribute to your father's journey. I always find writing to be healing. I hope the reader, you and I have healed a little bit through this poem. Thank you.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2018