Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A delightful story Patty and your personality suits this bold and beautiful cherry red mustang! How lovely, puts my Berlingo to shame! I used to drive a mini and I loved it, but I drive a practical vehicle now! I enjoyed your story very much, comma's are easy, just don't miss them out! We need to breath! He he he, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Hi, Dolly,

Thank you so much for reading and for sharing a bit of your car history. I hate to admit it, but I'm not driving a VW Jetta. Such a far cry from my beautiful Mustang. But, my knees can handle the automatic and well, maybe its time to slow down and let go of a big V8,

~patty~

Comment from Trudi Perkins

Excellent

This is a nice little bio about you and your car fetish of mustangs. Well written and I really enjoyed this. It's a very interesting story. Great job,keep writing.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thank you so much for reading my introduction. I appreciate your time,

~patty~

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Well written and well told. You've earned your name, well done.
My nickname would be Dodge Pickup, not nearly as classy as your's.
I will be checking out your club, I can use the help.
Thanks for sharing this.
Sharon

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Hi, Sharon;

Thank you for reading, as well as your interest in the club. Come on over - it will be fun to learn together,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written story and explanation of your name using for writing. I had an idea that could be the reason for your love for either a Mustang car or a Mustang horse. I will definitely join the Grammar rules club soon. If there is one who needs some instant lessons, it is definitely me. Lol.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Hi, Sandra;
Thank you so much for reading and you are more than welcome to join the club. We will have fun and I will be writing a lesson a week in the different parts of speech as well as punctuation,

~patty~

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hey, Patty.
My dad's younger brother, Kendall Cook, made it his life's passion to restore old Mustangs. The most beautiful in his collection, IMHO, was a 1964 1/2 fastback painted pearl white with Ford blue racing stripes. It was powered by a 289 Hypo, 4 bbl. with a four-speed Hurst tranny.
Talk about giddey-up, that pony would run!
It's nice to learn the origin of your user's name.
Thanks for sharing.
~Dean


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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Hi, Dean;
My '65 was a beauty. She had a 289, and I think she was the fastest car I ever owned. We lived in California part of the time I had her, and I loved driving her down the Strand in Coronado. I think I took her up to about 110 one unforgettable night. Luckily, there weren't any cops out that night, and I lived to drive another day.

Thank you for reading my first assignment of the Grammar Club.

~patty~

reply by Dean Kuch on 31-Jan-2018

You're more than welcome.