Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Good Love Gone Wrong" is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a true pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi; as always, your review brought a smile to my face. I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece and I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,

~patty~

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 12-Jul-2017

~patty~,as always you're very welcome.

Bless you and take care, the Duchess

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

This has colors of the rainbow. Beautiful presentation. thanks for sharing the author notes. romance poetry. I see. Like: The moonlight walks and soft pillow talks, I have not seen this word in many moons. Ecstasy. Unique word. Maybe a break up poem. To start love all over with a new person. Good job!
BOO-tastic!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hey Boo; thank you so much for the lovely review of this poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it and my word choices,

~patty~

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Mustangpatty,

The theme was well chosen. Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. The arrangement is fine, smoothly readable and understandable.
The only problem I found was the count-

Powerful pull between them, 7
There's never enough time, 6
Longing for each other 6

Two 6's ?????? where is the 5??
Just filling time 4

Everything else looks terrific. Flowing very nicely. Comprehensible and very professionally written. Your formatting was terrific!

The words you chose worked well.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Hi Camille; thank you for catching the problem with the syllable count - I went and made the edit.

I do appreciate your time to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,

~patty~

Comment from emptypage

Excellent

Oh, Honey...been there, done THAT!

What is it in humans that causes us to turn on someone/thing we never believed we could? Of course, they say that the opposite of love is not hate, but apathy. I agree. If we hate, we still feel something. I prefer being hated to not being an issue.

Very thought provoking, Patty.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi Marla; thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. I loved working with the poetic form and showing how easily love and hate can be interchanged. I totally agree with you about 'hate' meaning you are still a part of their lives - heh heh

~patty~

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good double Etheree poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi Teri; thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Hansel1

Excellent

An honest depiction of the ebb and flow of falling in and out of love. Guilty of this myself, it baffles me how many extreme emotions love spurs on.

Truth always makes statements relatable, and therefor appreciated. This piece is no different - Cheers!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm appreciative of your remarks and kind words,

~patty~

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Good Love Gone Wrong is an excellent etheree poem Patty.
Sometimes love is not enough is very true. Everyone says they are in love in the beginning but it takes more than love to sustain a relationship.

Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Hi Janet; thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece. I certainly enjoyed putting it together,

~patty~

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Patty,

What a remarkable difference in the message of both poems. *smile* I like the idea of combining opposites in a double etheree. What a novel concept! But then, you usually do surprise and please. Thanks!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Hi Robyn; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review this poem. I had a lot of fun constructing this double reverse etheree! I'm really glad you enjoyed it,

~patty~

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

It appears to me that your double reversed etheree has some of the characteristics of an antonym poem, but that's no problem, probably would be viewed as a plus.
Excellent.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Hi there; yes, I used the antonyms to contrast the beginning of the love affair and the end. I'm glad you read, reviewed, and liked the presentation,

~patty~

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

Patty,
your Etheree explanations are too much for me, but this is a good though sad "one."
:)
"Good Love Gone Wrong" is an apt title and surely tells the reader this will not be a happy poem. The format is fascinating and you "did" it beautifully.
Sometimes love is not enough, and sometime love is betrayed. Both sad.
good poem.
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Hi Katharine; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

~patty~