The Trump Backed Whale
a tale of a whale56 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
Great poem, I really like the way you used whales to represent Trump, very clever. At least the whales refused to build his wall, it looks like the real one might happen one day. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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Great poem, I really like the way you used whales to represent Trump, very clever. At least the whales refused to build his wall, it looks like the real one might happen one day. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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Thanks. With everyone poking fun at him I wanted to come up with something different. Glad you enjoyed. Let's hope that wall never happens. They haven't worked well in the past.
Comment from JDRBAR
The story and usage of words is absolutely great. I don't know if it's me or the poem, but I had trouble catching a natural rhythm which seemed to be there but eluded me.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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The story and usage of words is absolutely great. I don't know if it's me or the poem, but I had trouble catching a natural rhythm which seemed to be there but eluded me.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Hmmm...I thought it had a rhythm. Glad you enjoyed the fun little story.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Trump bashers should go live with Hillary and Kathy Griffith. If I had written this about Obama you would be up in arms. Get over it.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Trump bashers should go live with Hillary and Kathy Griffith. If I had written this about Obama you would be up in arms. Get over it.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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It was intended in fun.
Comment from JW
Trump whale - that's a thought. The fictional person talked about truly does 'whale' a lot.
But then again, it might be all fake new. Why would a whale need to whale, unless it found itself two-legged and not everyone agreed with him? JW
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Trump whale - that's a thought. The fictional person talked about truly does 'whale' a lot.
But then again, it might be all fake new. Why would a whale need to whale, unless it found itself two-legged and not everyone agreed with him? JW
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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This was all in fun. The fictional whale is a bit of a blowhard, and he does seem to resemble somebody, doesn't he? Thanks for your input.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahaha.
Don't worry, there will be no walls built because neither Canada or Mexico is willing to foot the bill to pay for their construction.
God knows the Trumpback Whale ain't gonna do it.
This was one whale of a tail...e-r-r-r, heh-heh... I mean tale, Cindy.
Poetically speaking, of corpse.
~Dean
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Hahahaha.
Don't worry, there will be no walls built because neither Canada or Mexico is willing to foot the bill to pay for their construction.
God knows the Trumpback Whale ain't gonna do it.
This was one whale of a tail...e-r-r-r, heh-heh... I mean tale, Cindy.
Poetically speaking, of corpse.
~Dean
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Glad it made you laugh. That was my intent. I think if he wants a wall he's going to have to build it himself.
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You're more than welcome, Cindy, and I agree.
Let's hope he decides not to do so!
Comment from kiwisteveh
If I had a new rhyme, I would certainly rhyme it.
That trumpback's now choosing to bugger up the climate.
"I don't give a fig what those scientists say.
I'm Trump, I know better; don't stand in my way!"
Thanks for sharing this, Cindy. I wonder where that big ol' whale will throw his weight around next?
Steve
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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If I had a new rhyme, I would certainly rhyme it.
That trumpback's now choosing to bugger up the climate.
"I don't give a fig what those scientists say.
I'm Trump, I know better; don't stand in my way!"
Thanks for sharing this, Cindy. I wonder where that big ol' whale will throw his weight around next?
Steve
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Yep, there's more I could have said, but I wasn't sure how to make that big ol' whale grope at the girls and mess up the climate. After all, he's a whale, and a whale would know better. LOL
Comment from ronnie k
LOL, loved this humor your metaphors are magical, my only regret in reviewing this poem is not being able to show the true joy I received for this imagine al gem Exceptional.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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LOL, loved this humor your metaphors are magical, my only regret in reviewing this poem is not being able to show the true joy I received for this imagine al gem Exceptional.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Thanks. He's so much fun to make fun of. So glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! Verrry good job having fun with Trump. If he's not the most successful president yet, he's definitely fun fodder for hilarity (and I don't mean Hillarity). :)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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LOL! Verrry good job having fun with Trump. If he's not the most successful president yet, he's definitely fun fodder for hilarity (and I don't mean Hillarity). :)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Thanks. Yep, he's fun to make fun of. I know everyone's doing it, but I hope I came up with something fresh.
Comment from Thal1959
Nothing personal, Cindy... but even as someone who didn't vote for Trump, I find all the Trump paranoia amusing. But at least you voiced your apparent disagreement with him in adult and civil terms. Good for you.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Nothing personal, Cindy... but even as someone who didn't vote for Trump, I find all the Trump paranoia amusing. But at least you voiced your apparent disagreement with him in adult and civil terms. Good for you.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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This was intended in fun. I hope you didn't take it too seriously. Thanks for your input.
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I never take any political writings seriously anymore.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the whales that seems to have the same problems at sea as what the humans had on land. There are too many wrong guys who want to stop those who's right.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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A very well-written poem about the whales that seems to have the same problems at sea as what the humans had on land. There are too many wrong guys who want to stop those who's right.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.