Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Hah, I guess she showed him! Love the colors in this double Etheree...bright green and cyan. I don't understand the dream master ect., but perhaps it's an on-going story, and I missed part. Great picture too! Blessings...

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Dear Irish Rain, the Dream Master is a recurring character in my poetry. He is the one who grants dreams to humans that ask him the favor. His adventures always take the dreamer on a great ride.

Yep, she showed him. Poor Merlin, he's always getting outwitted by Luna and the Dream Master. I'm glad you liked the colors I picked for this presentation, dear Irish Rain.

Happy Hump Day,
jeni

reply by Irish Rain on 01-Feb-2017

Aha...I'll remember that! I need a dream master!

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Feel free to use ours!

reply by Irish Rain on 01-Feb-2017

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A mystical fantasy write that had me hypnotised into another world, great art work and a certain ambience in your words that was mesmerising, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Dolly, I'm thrilled by your review. I so enjoyed reading it and thank you for the encouraging words. Thanks for being here to support me today.

love,
jeni

Comment from Moon baby

Exceptional

You have amazing talent, and a sharp brain. This is a nice artform piece and I love how it looks on paper. Nice artwork too! Very well thought out and I bet you whipped it out without trying! That's a compliment. Really nice, I like it!

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Dear Moon baby,

Geez Louise, I never thought I'd get a six for this poem! Thanks so much, I'm truly honored. I'm really happy that you enjoyed it so much and I do appreciate the compliment. It took about an hour to write, revise and polish. When I have a message from luna, my muse, it doesn't take me long to get it down on paper.

Thanks, again, for the incredible rating.

love,
jeni

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent double etheree, Jeni. Full of energy and vivid imagery.
Good use of alliteration starting with such a sight seldom seen.

Well done Jeni.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Dear Janet,

Hi, it's good to see you today! I'm glad you found this poem full of energy and vivid imagery, and liked the bits of alliteration I incorporated. Thanks for stopping by today to support my poetic efforts. I appreciate your presence.

love,
jeni

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

Merlin v. Dream Master Is a poem that was incredibly difficult to write. The syllable count and rhyme scheme, you chose made for an almost impossible task that you pulled off with clarity, good rhythm and a sense of purpose. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Welcome, dear Dr. Nad!

Your complimentary review warms my heart, and I thank you for the kind words. I always appreciate you stopping by to support my poetic efforts, my friend.

Blessings,
jeni

reply by Dr. Nad on 01-Feb-2017

You are welcome.
Embrace the love from above.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Really well constructed double etheree, Luna. It vibrates with energy.

Good job! Enjoyed the piece.

Hope you're having a wonderful week.

Sonali xx

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Welcome to my port, Sonali!

I thank you for your kind words of review regarding my poem. My week is proceeding very well, as I hope is yours. I appreciate you stopping by today in support of my poetic efforts.

Best,
luna

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written double Etheree. The magician should not be allowed in the dreams it can only leads to trickery. The dream master should stay in control.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Dear Sandra, thank you for the kind review and comments. Luna and the Dream Master always seem to outwit poor Merlin, that's for sure!

love,
jeni

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

This is a very well written double etheree poem, Jeni, I enjoy this style a lot. I like your presentation, the colour is very fetching. I have a 'dream catcher' over my bed, it catches the bad dreams. So Merlin had best beware. LOL Well done. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

Thanks, Sandra, I'm glad you enjoyed this. I like this style as well. Oh, I have a dream catcher tattooed on my left calf; I used to make dream catchers. They're awesome and some of the authentic ones are so beautiful. The tattoo didn't hurt that much except when he had to fill in the lines of the feathers on it; that was excruciating. But it's there, now, in all it's glory!

love,
jeni

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi - Yes, I like this very much. Only one small point - your line 8 in second etheree has nine syllables instead of eight - 'she's going to send him far beyond' - 'going' has 2 syllables as in 'go-ing'. It will be easy for you to edit - drop the 'far' for example. Otherwise, this is really lovely - good wording and the display is perfect. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

Thank you for the kind review and catch. I've changed "going" to "set."

Comment from sanejane

Excellent

Etheree is one of my favourites of the popular styles for FS contests, and this one is beautifully done. This poem flows well, and has an excellent rhyme-scheme. Combined with the high-quality and attractive presentation, it's a pleasure to read.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for your kind words of review, sanejane. They are much appreciated!

reply by sanejane on 31-Jan-2017

Hi Luna - I should have guessed that was your poem! Jane