Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

This is an unique way of presenting a poem. I kind of like it.
The pictures were great with a wonderful ending.
We all must transition and evolve.
Excellent writing!
Michael

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thanks, Mike! I'm happy that you enjoyed.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Luna,

I don't think what you've meant to put in the artwork is what is appearing. There is a series of pics showing in turn - a series of five. Your pyramid MAY be the fifth in the series? Want to check on it?

Not lowering the rating.

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

ERROR ERROR WIL ROBINSON! I think it's fixed now. Thanks, girlfriend. Sorry

reply by robyn corum on 26-Jan-2017

No, 'Change' is not fixed. now, IT'S showing the series of five pix. The other one IS fixed, though.

reply by robyn corum on 26-Jan-2017

Okay, now the art is there, but no poetry...?

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

It's there now. The poem published before I wanted to. Iit should have been still in preview. Live 'n learn, I guess. I'm trying to learn some new things on the computer!

reply by robyn corum on 26-Jan-2017

Yep. I see it!