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Luna's Form Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Music"
a place to gather my poetic forms

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Comment from Kingsland
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Music hath power to soothe the savage breast. Music can delight and make one cry at the same time. I am a music lover, the blues or rock as long as it's done well. This was an excellent piece of poetic art to have read and written this response for... John

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
    Thank you, John! It was lovely to have a review from you. I'm so happy that you enjoyed this. Thank you once again...
Comment from sandy montgomery
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This piece was very lyrical, fitting as it was about music. The rhymes were very natural and flowed from one line to the next seamlessly. Your words floated and sang down the page in a waterfall of delightful image and phrase. I identified with the message as any music lover would. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
    And thank YOU for reading my post, sandy! I enjoyed reading your review...it was lyrical on its own merit. I appreciate your continued attention to my portfolio.

    Love 'n Light,

    jeni
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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I really like this one. It has a great flow... almost like a song. And I love what you said. I always enjoy your unique and heartfelt poetry. Well done, my friend.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
    Thank you, Gypsy! I truly appreciate your comment about a song. To me, that is high praise. Thank you for your continuing interest in my portfolio!

    Love 'n Light,

    jeni
Comment from robyn corum
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Luna,

Yes, the meter was off in places, but I got the gist. *smile* A happy little poem that made me smile.

Favorite lines:
My music takes me anywhere,
I sail above the moon and stars,
I'll write of this in my memoirs.

Thanks!

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
    Hi, Robyn!

    I'm glad that you got the gist *smile*. I'm thrilled that this made you smile and that you showed me your favorite lines. That helps me to get to know you a bit better.

    Thanks to you for your continuing attention to my portfolio!

    Love 'n Light,

    jeni
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Luna,

This quatern, given the challenging poetic format, was very well-written and well-metered. I share your love of music. I download music on iTunes so I have my favorite song accessible at my fingertips anytime and anywhere. As your poem eloquently describes, music is therapeutic and does wonders. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
    Thank you, Poetic Friend, for this very kind review regarding my poem. I'm happy that you share your personal stuff with me so that I can get to know you a bit better. I, too, download songs from a number of sources. I've got a playlist of around 4,600 songs and I put it on rotate so that a random song plays each time, and has a better chance to making it out of that large playlist.

    I enjoyed reading your review and thank you for your continuing attention to my portfolio.

    Love 'n light,

    Jeni