Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Eric Clapton"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from sandy montgomery
I will give this challenge some thought. I liked your piece. Not too familiar with his music but I like what I've heard of it. I have a few favorites to try out before choosing one. Thank you for the challenge and as always thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
I will give this challenge some thought. I liked your piece. Not too familiar with his music but I like what I've heard of it. I have a few favorites to try out before choosing one. Thank you for the challenge and as always thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!
luna
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A majestic acrostic to one that has always held my attention. You captured the feeling of his performances:
notes fly back and forth across the stage
tunes for the masses
thought-provoking...definitely
This was exceptional
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
A majestic acrostic to one that has always held my attention. You captured the feeling of his performances:
notes fly back and forth across the stage
tunes for the masses
thought-provoking...definitely
This was exceptional
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Barb I should have known that you love him. Thanks for the happy review...Love ya.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem. Eric Clapton is one of my personal favorite artists too, you did a great job honoring him in this acrostic.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
A very well-written acrostic poem. Eric Clapton is one of my personal favorite artists too, you did a great job honoring him in this acrostic.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thank you, Sandra. Eric Clapton is my favorite of all time, I enjoyed him when I was 14 years old!
Comment from heisemg
I do not normally review poetry, because I am unschooled in its nuances although I do sometime use poetry to tell a particularly emotional story. However, when I saw your title, "Eric Clayton" my favorite guitarist, I had to read it. With the first word, you captured him and I read on. Thank you for sharing your poem and love for him with me. Very very good.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
I do not normally review poetry, because I am unschooled in its nuances although I do sometime use poetry to tell a particularly emotional story. However, when I saw your title, "Eric Clayton" my favorite guitarist, I had to read it. With the first word, you captured him and I read on. Thank you for sharing your poem and love for him with me. Very very good.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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That's great! Thank you for reviewing this one. I'm glad that you thought that I captured him and that you decided to continue to read.
I appreciate your attention to my portfolio
Comment from Thomas Bowling
There are so many different styles of poetry. You have chosen one of the more difficult types and done an excellent job of writing a fine poem while following all the rules.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
There are so many different styles of poetry. You have chosen one of the more difficult types and done an excellent job of writing a fine poem while following all the rules.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Hi Thomas, thanks for reviewing this one. I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
I appreciate your kind review to the moon and back!
Comment from Ella25
So he is mine, one of the favourite musicians. Not that many left anymore who would sing and make music the way Eric does. Range way of words to describe his characteristics and way he produces the music. Well done. Blessings, Ella
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
So he is mine, one of the favourite musicians. Not that many left anymore who would sing and make music the way Eric does. Range way of words to describe his characteristics and way he produces the music. Well done. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks, Ella. I appreciate your kind review.
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You are welcome. Ella
Comment from Pantygynt
I normall am not fond of acrostics as many of them end up as unrelated lists held together only by the needs of the initial letter. A few manage to get poetic devices inserted and to tell a story that flows on in delightful enjambment, but not many. However, this one tells a story with several instances of enjambment that create a good flow overall.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
I normall am not fond of acrostics as many of them end up as unrelated lists held together only by the needs of the initial letter. A few manage to get poetic devices inserted and to tell a story that flows on in delightful enjambment, but not many. However, this one tells a story with several instances of enjambment that create a good flow overall.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Hey, my friend. I normally do not like or even write acrostics, but I just felt like it. Glad that you thought this one had a good flow, I always appreciate what you say. Thanks for this review.
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The fact that I don't like something doesn't mean you should feel the same or shy away from them. I will review what you write as best and as impartially as I can.
Comment from joeruptak
Very well done
it is easy to see that you admire the talent of Eric Clapton
sometime the message is hard to get through in the acrostic style. You succeeded in doing this very well
this was a very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your caring
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
Very well done
it is easy to see that you admire the talent of Eric Clapton
sometime the message is hard to get through in the acrostic style. You succeeded in doing this very well
this was a very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your caring
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
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thanks! I'm happy that you thought I did a good job. Your kind review is appreciated.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was really nice, Luna, I have been a fan of Eric Clapton for centuries now. (It seems like centuries!) He has written and sung many wonderful songs and music, your tribute to him is this lovely acrostic poem, is excellent. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
That was really nice, Luna, I have been a fan of Eric Clapton for centuries now. (It seems like centuries!) He has written and sung many wonderful songs and music, your tribute to him is this lovely acrostic poem, is excellent. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review of my poem. I do appreciate it!
luna