Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Words upon Words"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from Dean Kuch
It appeared to me as I read this that you've written an error free palindrome poem, Jeni. It reads the exact opposite in reverse from the way it's written, and it even manages to make sense.
Again, not an easy feat to accomplish where palindrome poetry is concerned.
The last time I attempted to write one of these I had a headache for a solid week!
I hope that hasn't happened to you.
Nice work.
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It appeared to me as I read this that you've written an error free palindrome poem, Jeni. It reads the exact opposite in reverse from the way it's written, and it even manages to make sense.
Again, not an easy feat to accomplish where palindrome poetry is concerned.
The last time I attempted to write one of these I had a headache for a solid week!
I hope that hasn't happened to you.
Nice work.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
Comment from winnona
A very nice poem. I loved the words you chose and how you used the, they flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork finished the piece well.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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A very nice poem. I loved the words you chose and how you used the, they flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork finished the piece well.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review of my poem, winnona. I do appreciate it! Thanks for reading my stuff!
luna
Comment from ronnie k
My friend you put much in your notes but for me the time I spend on writing them takes away for my reviewing and having my poetic pleasure fed by the movement and joy that I receive from knowing that I may not know the correctness but be assured that love for poetry is sincere, I love your magic and I will not let my not under sfanding the thousand style stave my love, friend and fan of LUNA!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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My friend you put much in your notes but for me the time I spend on writing them takes away for my reviewing and having my poetic pleasure fed by the movement and joy that I receive from knowing that I may not know the correctness but be assured that love for poetry is sincere, I love your magic and I will not let my not under sfanding the thousand style stave my love, friend and fan of LUNA!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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ronnie, you are so amazing. I can wrap my head around your thoughts and I basically agree. If I didn't put in the notes, though, immediately someone would ask for them, as I've learned from experience.
I love your reviews and am grateful for YOU, my friend!
jeni
Comment from Ulla
Hi Luna, this is absolutely great. How difficult it must be to write a poem that can be read two ways. I'm amazed. Very well done. All he best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Hi Luna, this is absolutely great. How difficult it must be to write a poem that can be read two ways. I'm amazed. Very well done. All he best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
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Well, Ulla, just let me tell you that first, one must be in the right frame of mind. As soon as I start to write, I can tell if the poem that I write will be effective. If I'm in the right state of mind, I keep writing and it's usually cool. If it's not the right time, I can feel it in my gut, and my gut never lets me down.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my piece of writing.
I truly appreciate you expressing your feelings.
Thanks, Ulla!
Comment from Justin Chopin
Well done Jeni. The poem itself with all of the mythological imagery and the references to sleep reminded me of a mix of Cream's song " White Room" and The Beatle's song " Lucy in the sky with diamonds." I like the fact that you were able to connect the images of the pillow and bed with images of children sleeping and that you were also able to connect the moon and the character of the mother moon with all of the fantastical creatures the : Centaurs, Trolls, and fairies who utilize the evening hours for their own nocturnal pleasures. Very creative can't wait to read more of these .
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Well done Jeni. The poem itself with all of the mythological imagery and the references to sleep reminded me of a mix of Cream's song " White Room" and The Beatle's song " Lucy in the sky with diamonds." I like the fact that you were able to connect the images of the pillow and bed with images of children sleeping and that you were also able to connect the moon and the character of the mother moon with all of the fantastical creatures the : Centaurs, Trolls, and fairies who utilize the evening hours for their own nocturnal pleasures. Very creative can't wait to read more of these .
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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I LOVE your review...White Room and Lucy in the Sky...great pieces of music. I love all the images you got from this poem. I am going to write more of these...
jeni
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
As with all your poetry, you write it masterfully. I see nothing wrong with this shadow poem at all. The imagery is superb, I love the Trolls and Centaurs, very good imagery that. Each line reads so well both ways, which is so hard to accomplish. Well done, I can't wait to see what next you attempt! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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As with all your poetry, you write it masterfully. I see nothing wrong with this shadow poem at all. The imagery is superb, I love the Trolls and Centaurs, very good imagery that. Each line reads so well both ways, which is so hard to accomplish. Well done, I can't wait to see what next you attempt! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work.
luna
Comment from Janet Foor
To me, this is a very difficult poem form to accomplish. I think you have met the challenge beautifully. Lovely imagery throughout.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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To me, this is a very difficult poem form to accomplish. I think you have met the challenge beautifully. Lovely imagery throughout.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work.
luna
Comment from mbroyles2
Extremely nice imagery and easy to read words.
Centaurs and Trolls. Fairies and Luna. Oh my what a picture you present.
Excellent job!
Michael
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Extremely nice imagery and easy to read words.
Centaurs and Trolls. Fairies and Luna. Oh my what a picture you present.
Excellent job!
Michael
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!
luna
Comment from AnnaLinda
Luna,
I know how difficult this form can be. I think you
did a top job on your Palindrome. You've got
some really great alliteration in this and some
very lunar and magical imagery too.
This is a cute line:
"moonscape crowded tonight."
Interesting presentation as well,
Linda
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Luna,
I know how difficult this form can be. I think you
did a top job on your Palindrome. You've got
some really great alliteration in this and some
very lunar and magical imagery too.
This is a cute line:
"moonscape crowded tonight."
Interesting presentation as well,
Linda
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks, Linda, so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!
luna
Comment from Kingsland
Be very careful, as you just never know what is waiting in the shadows. I just had to put a negative spin on your well-written poetic voice. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for this excellent piece of poetic art... John
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Be very careful, as you just never know what is waiting in the shadows. I just had to put a negative spin on your well-written poetic voice. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for this excellent piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much, John, for reading my work and for this review's negative spin on my poem!. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!
luna
