Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Triolet. A very interesting topic you have chosen. A fat and grumpy troll that lives three million miles from the moon.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Dear Sandra,

I appreciate your thoughts on my nonsense triolet. I believe the troll will recurr in the future.


I appreciate your continued attention to my work...Thanks to the moon and back!

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

I love it!
Your poems flow so well and I see the images clearly. Wonderful rhymes that smoothly run throughout.
I'm truly a fan
Michael

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Dear Michael,

Thank you, my friend for your lovely review. I'm happy that you enjoyed the flow, imagery and rhymes.

Thanks for being my fan!


I appreciate your continued attention to my work...Thanks to the moon and back!

Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Excellent

The objective correlative of the poem is a reminiscence on the pattern of life evinced three milion miles from mother moon.

The work highlights the commanding image of the goings on as inclusive of theatrics such as musicians at play;with the troll playing its role of staying in bed until noon each day.

The work earns its texture through the use of alliteration,metaphor,rhymes and onomatopoeia.

Excellent work!Bravo!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Dear Lloyd,

I'm grateful for the insightful review you offer here. I'm happy to learn where you think the poem earns its texture.

I believe the troll may recur in a future writing effort.


I appreciate your continued attention to my work...Thanks to the moon and back!

reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 23-Nov-2016

Great Flight Luna!Remain Blessed!

Comment from WriteSins!

Excellent

A simple, nice little poem. The structure and word choice really pulls the poem together. The artwork is also very fitting! Great work and keep it up! Have a great day!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Dear WriteSins!,

Thanks for your kind review. I'm really happy that you enjoyed the poem and the accompanying artwork.

You have a great day as well!

I appreciate your continued attention to my work...Thanks to the moon and back!

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Great piece. I could see a children's story springing from this piece very naturally. The art and color scheme fit well. Thank you for sharing your work.

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

hi, sandy!

Thanks so much for your gracious review. I believe we'll see the troll again in the future.

I appreciate your continued attention to my work...Thanks to the moon and back!

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

Exception, hello, as a recovering addict I read this poem with probally the most feeling, I have asked myself many times "Why, How did I live 67years" well this poem gave me a look at the darkness of addiction, the almost living evil that waits somewhere in the darkness.
Share your lost it will save someone.

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Dear Ronnie, congratulations on your recovery. I was first introduced to the rooms in 1984 and i thank my higher power constantly. I appreciate your words of review.