To Last Forever
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Comment from Joan E.
I like the wonder on the little boy's face as he catches the uncatchable. Your "cross my heart" phrase and its repeat seem to echo that sense. Your free verse is a timely Easter tribute. Here's to hope... -Joan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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I like the wonder on the little boy's face as he catches the uncatchable. Your "cross my heart" phrase and its repeat seem to echo that sense. Your free verse is a timely Easter tribute. Here's to hope... -Joan
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi J...-smile-
sorry i'm running late.
thank you so much...happy you enjoyed...hope you had a great Easter. love Michael
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Hope the bunnies danced around you too! And good luck catching up... Hugs- Joan
Comment from thonnigford09
I just ran out of six stars. I loved this and I have forgotten the beauty that the Rosary brings to the soul. Thank you and I would definitely recommend this poem. thonnigford09
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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I just ran out of six stars. I loved this and I have forgotten the beauty that the Rosary brings to the soul. Thank you and I would definitely recommend this poem. thonnigford09
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hey...-smile-
well thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. love michael
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Sorry for the late reply. been gone. thonnigford09
Comment from amada
Such a promise of a resurrection day. I take it. I take it. it goes so well with the poem I just posted for my grandson. I wish you could read it and give me your opinion. It means so much to me.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Such a promise of a resurrection day. I take it. I take it. it goes so well with the poem I just posted for my grandson. I wish you could read it and give me your opinion. It means so much to me.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi Happy...-smile-
I think your Grandson loves you. I think the last thing he would want is for you not the hear the music anymore. One day...faith says we'll know all the reasons why...and He will personally dry every tear...forever. love you michael
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Michael,
I like the music, it suits this piece. Not sure if it needed a warning for that slightly risqué pic, but you know how some can be, especially around here, it seems. (No more forum for me lol) I still want to have someone to color with when those conversations are over ;) Craig is actually a close friend of mine, not that you could tell in there lol
I really like this passage and your black and white presentation is striking:
alive consumes dead to right
trust measures faithful sight
understanding taste satisfies
Keep saying what you are saying, I get it :)
Kim
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Hi Michael,
I like the music, it suits this piece. Not sure if it needed a warning for that slightly risqué pic, but you know how some can be, especially around here, it seems. (No more forum for me lol) I still want to have someone to color with when those conversations are over ;) Craig is actually a close friend of mine, not that you could tell in there lol
I really like this passage and your black and white presentation is striking:
alive consumes dead to right
trust measures faithful sight
understanding taste satisfies
Keep saying what you are saying, I get it :)
Kim
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Hey...-smile-...really...he is...? I've been trying hard to like him....-smile-.....ah I'm sure he's just lil' up tight....ah haa....what do you mean...you better come back....they gang up on me all the time...thank you for stopping by.....big love Michael
Comment from RGstar
This, for me, is one of your best,. Truly brilliant writing in terms of subject matter and the style of which the piercing-like necessities are homed in on.
You do not get the credit you deserve. My vote for you in poem of the month says how much I appreciate your style and person.
Such a joy to read this one, and there is a lot more beneath the surface of this than meets the eye, we only need to find it.
Bravo my good brother, you are one of those dear to me here.
Keep writing. That report style will serve you well.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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This, for me, is one of your best,. Truly brilliant writing in terms of subject matter and the style of which the piercing-like necessities are homed in on.
You do not get the credit you deserve. My vote for you in poem of the month says how much I appreciate your style and person.
Such a joy to read this one, and there is a lot more beneath the surface of this than meets the eye, we only need to find it.
Bravo my good brother, you are one of those dear to me here.
Keep writing. That report style will serve you well.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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-bigsmile-...man thank you Bro...been working a lot lately...havent really had time to sink...so thought I was a bit rusty...ah loved the song....love her voice. You are Poetry man...if you're in my corner ...i'm good to go. love ya Bro...michael
