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Comment from danpald
Values meet with the poem
Seen to have lost the tone
Still the bugs do find them sweet
For they never can truly retreat
The values will come to be
The hope that sets us all free
Even with the bugs filled inside
These values remain the power to abide
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Values meet with the poem
Seen to have lost the tone
Still the bugs do find them sweet
For they never can truly retreat
The values will come to be
The hope that sets us all free
Even with the bugs filled inside
These values remain the power to abide
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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yea yea yea,...but values are meant to be followed by even those who teach em' and sometimes...well take a look around. -smile-....you can get up here around back. -wink-...love Michael
Comment from Judvan2
I love it in its wonderful difference. I get tired of the everyday perfection. This is perfectly unexplainable, unless I look underneath and think! Love that whole effort you've made me make. Thanks for this!
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I love it in its wonderful difference. I get tired of the everyday perfection. This is perfectly unexplainable, unless I look underneath and think! Love that whole effort you've made me make. Thanks for this!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
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why thank you Judy....its obvious you're very intelligent woman...I'm Michael....very pleased to meet you. um...sometimes I write pretty poetry too....just so you know...-wink-...love Michael
Comment from closetpoetjester
Screw the world huh? LOL
Now I see you've taken a swipe at pretty much everything...well you need to swipe a little harder mate...I have bugs on my screen haha
Now, Lawnmower Man...go tuck into some homebaked apple pie with lashings of whipped cream and topped in icing sugar and you is gonna forget everything.
Granted, you won't be getting through the doorway.
Hang on, bad idea. I need the lawns mowed haha
I DO enjoy reading you, your avid descriptions are like no others here and I often work hard and read TWICE dammit! haha
Now, is there a ladder in that tree house...or have you had stairs fitted? LMAO
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Screw the world huh? LOL
Now I see you've taken a swipe at pretty much everything...well you need to swipe a little harder mate...I have bugs on my screen haha
Now, Lawnmower Man...go tuck into some homebaked apple pie with lashings of whipped cream and topped in icing sugar and you is gonna forget everything.
Granted, you won't be getting through the doorway.
Hang on, bad idea. I need the lawns mowed haha
I DO enjoy reading you, your avid descriptions are like no others here and I often work hard and read TWICE dammit! haha
Now, is there a ladder in that tree house...or have you had stairs fitted? LMAO
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
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you betcha....F em...
yes Maam, and if your not careful were gonna wrestle...-smile-
I got no apple pie....I'm all alone and burn toast without even concentrating. oh dont worry I'm starving to death I could squeeze through your top and second button before you rose...bet...? ah ahaha...well I dont Sassy...its been so loooong I'm afraid the lawn mower might be rusted...hahaha...thanks you Sexy....love Michael
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LAMO nothing like a rusty tool!
Sassy
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-handsonhip-....you've neglected your grass...-frown-
Comment from DonandVicki
A very interesting post that leaves the avenue to the imagination wide open. The multi form art work that you chose is a complement to your well structured poetic verse.
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A very interesting post that leaves the avenue to the imagination wide open. The multi form art work that you chose is a complement to your well structured poetic verse.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
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Hey there...-smile- ...yep..-handtwirl- all that and so much more...thanks man. love michael
Comment from l.raven
HI Baby, I grant you...it's not a perfect world....but there's still a lot of good in it...(wink)...smile you...I love your poem...and a great video...you have always had a good taste in music....LOL...on your picture...both of them...ya know I love it....love you sweetie...Linda xxoo
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HI Baby, I grant you...it's not a perfect world....but there's still a lot of good in it...(wink)...smile you...I love your poem...and a great video...you have always had a good taste in music....LOL...on your picture...both of them...ya know I love it....love you sweetie...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
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-smile-...Hey you.....well okay if you say so...-smile- alrighty then...mucho appreciation love ya michael
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love ya too...and you smile as well...ok....Love Linda xxxooo
Comment from mermaids
You have a vivid use of words that reflects the modern world. Television exploded into reality years ago is a fitting line, television has shown the real world for quite some time now. Your words make the reader think.
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You have a vivid use of words that reflects the modern world. Television exploded into reality years ago is a fitting line, television has shown the real world for quite some time now. Your words make the reader think.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
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well its about somebody did...-smile-... the days of wine an haladone induced comas are over. its time wake up and make some coffee...-smile-...cream and sugar please....love Michael
Comment from Jacqueline1616
Damn!! I don't 6 and this needs 11. LOVE IT!!! Never heard that song before, totally fits. This crazy society!
This is poetry that makes me think and yet still keeps me guessing at some meanings.
Thank you so very much for sharing!
Love it!!
Jackie
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Damn!! I don't 6 and this needs 11. LOVE IT!!! Never heard that song before, totally fits. This crazy society!
This is poetry that makes me think and yet still keeps me guessing at some meanings.
Thank you so very much for sharing!
Love it!!
Jackie
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
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-headshake-...alright...alright...Jesus I worried for a second...okay okay...its gonna be okay.....let me think about it...I'll save you....love Michael
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LOL!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Loved the musical you put with this poem. It is certainly something different. This is well written and fun to read.
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Excellent. Loved the musical you put with this poem. It is certainly something different. This is well written and fun to read.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
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haha...thank you...yea I found the song....and ah wal la...haha...love Michael
Comment from Nika2016
Fantastic! I love your presentation! Your ideas and words coupled with the music..genius. You should be making videos promoting CDs or having your own art shows. This is a mixed art form. It is fun and poignant. I think you now have my vote for best poet.
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Fantastic! I love your presentation! Your ideas and words coupled with the music..genius. You should be making videos promoting CDs or having your own art shows. This is a mixed art form. It is fun and poignant. I think you now have my vote for best poet.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
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Where have you been....I've missed you so much. -headshake-...you have no idea how hard its been without you. I am fraught with emotion momentarily and must humbly beg you turn whilst I breakdown to tears. Thank you JESUS! Hallelujah has been born again!....bless your child Father for deserving is her name Nika2016...big love Michael
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So now what are they saying? That you cannot use outside media? They removed Nurse Ratchet. Well your poetry is good without it. Now you stand alone Mikey. Shine!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Most things in life today are false and not what it used to be. We pay for things with plastic cards and struggle for.months to get the debt paid.
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Most things in life today are false and not what it used to be. We pay for things with plastic cards and struggle for.months to get the debt paid.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
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yes Maam credit cards are the mark of the beast. you...we ..all of us should be given basic needs...or at least the means to obtain them. We shouldn't have to fight one another or despise the same for the opportunity. Its a world gone mad and the world is everywhere...better build a tree house...-wink-...love Michael
