Comment from LanceHill

Excellent

This is a humorous and well written entry. Epitaphs are sometimes eloquent and sometimes funny. This would be great. Lol. Thanks for sharing. God bless.

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2016

Lance,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...........................Portia

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

LOL I enjoyed your tombstone poem. Good job with the format. You tell a great little story. I see no changes. Good job and best wishes in the contest.

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2016

Janny,

Thanks so much for your review , very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed this little poem and have a wonderful day. Blessings............................Portia