Comment from ericawrites

Exceptional

This is an excellent haiku,
Very clever response to the writing prompt.

Great sartori line.

You may well have a winner here.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. Thank you for the six stars :)

Comment from Tessa Kay

Excellent

Love the 'early bird special'. Haikus have become my favourite type of poem.
Love the aha-moment in them. So clever.
Hope you do well in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I really appreciated this haiku.

The denouement of the final line is clever and funny.

A great piece of accompanying art work as well, which doesn't overshadow the poem.

Good luck in the booths.

GMG

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 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it.