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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Down & Out--The Adventure Continues"GROWTH? ADULATION? HURRY -- CHOOSE!
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Comment from Eigle Rull
My friend, I really enjoyed this chapter. It was very well written and easy to understand. I brought back some of my own memories too. The story of the girl was very interesting and this entire post held my attention very well. I don't think I've read anything of yours that I have not enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes, my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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My friend, I really enjoyed this chapter. It was very well written and easy to understand. I brought back some of my own memories too. The story of the girl was very interesting and this entire post held my attention very well. I don't think I've read anything of yours that I have not enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes, my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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You are so wonderful, Elgie. You help to keep me going! Your six stars is appreciated.
Comment from Bryana
I was surprised to see the words Mongoloid
Idiot together, I thought that by calling a
person Mongoloid it was understood he/she
was mentally challenged.
Was she there looking for food? I would like
to know more about the poor girl.
I will be waiting for your next writing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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I was surprised to see the words Mongoloid
Idiot together, I thought that by calling a
person Mongoloid it was understood he/she
was mentally challenged.
Was she there looking for food? I would like
to know more about the poor girl.
I will be waiting for your next writing.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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As I remember it, Mongolian Idiot was the first term, followed by Mongoloid, and finally Down Syndrome. I hope to have you on board for my next post, though she won't be a part of it. Her story is over. We continued to hear her, but didn't pursue any action. This was the 60's and we were young and foolish.
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I will be waiting for your next writing.
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
I like the way you recant your childhood and the things you did. The story moves along at a nice clip and the dialogue is good. I can tell you look back on theses days with fondness.
One thing...
yokes...yolks
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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I like the way you recant your childhood and the things you did. The story moves along at a nice clip and the dialogue is good. I can tell you look back on theses days with fondness.
One thing...
yokes...yolks
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Bless you Christof! I made the corrections. I don't know how I missed it. I'm so glad you enjoyed. It wasn't exactly childhood. We were young men at 21 yrs old. But it was fun and life was an adventure. Thanks again.
Comment from anabellapongasi
I enjoyed reading this journal entry piece Wow, that was a long time ago in your youth. I hope you get around to writing the story of that Mongoloid girl and her chant.
Blessings,
Anabella
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I enjoyed reading this journal entry piece Wow, that was a long time ago in your youth. I hope you get around to writing the story of that Mongoloid girl and her chant.
Blessings,
Anabella
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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I really don't have any more to write about the young girl, Anabella. We didn't see her again and we got so used to hearing her chant after a while we didn't even notice it.