2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "1/6/1 (Blue)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
55 total reviews
Comment from ProSongwriter
I'm always amazed how poets can say so much in so few words. I am almost exclusively novelist ... takes me 80,000 words to get my story across!
I would be in trouble with this one as my favorite color is orange ... rhyming would be a bit of a task!
You did a super job. Well done. Good luck in the contest ...
Alan
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
I'm always amazed how poets can say so much in so few words. I am almost exclusively novelist ... takes me 80,000 words to get my story across!
I would be in trouble with this one as my favorite color is orange ... rhyming would be a bit of a task!
You did a super job. Well done. Good luck in the contest ...
Alan
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review :)
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You're welcome!
Comment from honeytree
The art work is superb for these words
So much has been told in a few words
I love the way how the sea moves here
Wonderful writing.
Annie
I have no six left
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
The art work is superb for these words
So much has been told in a few words
I love the way how the sea moves here
Wonderful writing.
Annie
I have no six left
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review :)
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I really liked reading your work
Annie
Comment from LIJ Red
Can't resist reviewing these short and quick ones, but they always go like a single salted peanut. Hey, swap top and bottom lines and it still works. This is excellent for the genre.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
Can't resist reviewing these short and quick ones, but they always go like a single salted peanut. Hey, swap top and bottom lines and it still works. This is excellent for the genre.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review :)
Comment from GWinterwin
Wow this color is such a beautiful and vibrant color. Blue just happens to be my favorite color also. Good rhyming also which is a plus for an already great poem.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
Wow this color is such a beautiful and vibrant color. Blue just happens to be my favorite color also. Good rhyming also which is a plus for an already great poem.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review :)
Comment from DALLAS01
What a captivating combination. Blue does seem to have a calming effect. Rules adhered to and the presentation is certainly attention getting. Good luck in the contest, a great entry.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
What a captivating combination. Blue does seem to have a calming effect. Rules adhered to and the presentation is certainly attention getting. Good luck in the contest, a great entry.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review :)
Comment from Amy Greta
I love blue too, the hue, not the feeling:) Excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest! The images you chose are very engaging and beautiful and nicely embellish your simple yet strong tribute to the soothing color blue. Very well crafted!
Best of luck,
Amy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
I love blue too, the hue, not the feeling:) Excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest! The images you chose are very engaging and beautiful and nicely embellish your simple yet strong tribute to the soothing color blue. Very well crafted!
Best of luck,
Amy
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you Amy :)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Blue
Hue
True
1-6-1 followed exactly
Nicely done as the content is kept in tack.
Great contest entry it is a strong contender
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
Blue
Hue
True
1-6-1 followed exactly
Nicely done as the content is kept in tack.
Great contest entry it is a strong contender
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you Barb :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your 1-6-1 poem is perfectly written. Great rhymes as well. I love blue too:) Good luck to you in the contest.
~~teresa~~
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
Your 1-6-1 poem is perfectly written. Great rhymes as well. I love blue too:) Good luck to you in the contest.
~~teresa~~
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you Teresa :)
Comment from bhogg
Such a weird form , but you did well with it. The syllable count is cottect, and you have a coherent message. Have to agree, blue is my favorite as well. Good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
Such a weird form , but you did well with it. The syllable count is cottect, and you have a coherent message. Have to agree, blue is my favorite as well. Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you bhogg :)
Comment from anabellapongasi
wow the image is beautiful and mesmerizing! And lovely statement written in 1-6-1 format about your favorite color true blue. Best to you in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
wow the image is beautiful and mesmerizing! And lovely statement written in 1-6-1 format about your favorite color true blue. Best to you in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you Anabella :)