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GROWTH? ADULATION? HURRY -- CHOOSE!

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Comment from emrpoems
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I just read this and it frustrated me a lot. Simple - I am no writer - I do not like reading unless the article captures my interest immensely. However, I have the intention I may even call it the desire to write a novel which I am sure will be great but don't feel I am able to do so. I am looking for a ghost writer. Is that a good idea and will there be the same satisfaction as if I write it myself?
Will read 'Don't break the chain calender

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
    Thank you for reading this, my friend, even if it wasn't to your liking. I'm sorry, I wouldn't be able to answer about a ghost writer.They are more used by movie stars or politicians who think their lives are special enough to tell about, but don't want to spend the time learning the craft.
Comment from Curly Girly
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Lol! ...
"I knew it worked, so I wanted to try something new."

A valid truth and a good analogy:
Of course the all-important medium between Vision and Birth is Time.

I'm not sure about this:
English teacher, or boy-,
boy- ?

what moved you in the original vision[.]

If you don't want the re-marriage to go dry on you[,] don't wait for inspiration

Finis!
Did you mean: Finish!

I really didn't want to give you 6 stars today, but it would be too mean not to do so--BECAUSE this is a fab chapter!
LIKE :)


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
    I'll take it anyway! LOL, I'll make the corrections tomorrow on this. The "Finis!" is Latin for "The End". It was used for humorous effect. It was used in the 19th century to excess and it's now used only for comic effect.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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YESSSSSSS! You gave me a pump. Thank you, dawling. (*>*)



Hi, Jay...

_ I have no unfinished projects but his book I'm writing now.
_ That makes 7 novels completed.
_ EEK! My unfinished work is not doing the final edits to publish---which I plan to rectify very soon. (*<*)
_ I so have a couple of poem ideas---that's it.
_ This was a fun read, my friend.
_ It will be more fun if you give me one pump--two pumps. I'm not picky!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)


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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
    You are most welcome, Jax. Glad you had fun with this.
Comment from barkingdog
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Very well said, Jay. I don't think that I've ever thought about the process of writing a novel. But writing the four that I have, it did take dedication and time and determination to not quit even when things felt tedious. If I could push through today, I'd make it to tomorrow. And on it went, driven by a spark to bring it to a viable conclusion. What you have called birth.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
    Thank you so much, Ellen. I appreciate your kindness and generous six stars.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Good job explaining what we all go thru at times. I'm happy to say I have VERY few started-but-left books and stories. I work on enthusiasm, so I keep going till I fall asleep if I like wht I'm writing. If it leaves me cold and will need serious rethinking, I just stop. No fun in that, when there are other stories eager for their turn. :)

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
    Here again, this is more for the beginning writer. So many I've found don't have the discipline to finish what they start. That's why this will hopefully speak to them. Thanks for reading and connecting with it.