Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 10034 "Nina: A 100 Word Horror"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
87 total reviews
Comment from Zinnia48
Major creepy! I actually got a chill when I got to that last line! No baths for me for awhile! Others have probably pointed this out, but I believe you want "faucet" and not "facet". A typo, I'm sure! Best wishes and good luck with the contest! Caroline
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Major creepy! I actually got a chill when I got to that last line! No baths for me for awhile! Others have probably pointed this out, but I believe you want "faucet" and not "facet". A typo, I'm sure! Best wishes and good luck with the contest! Caroline
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
Comment from boxergirl
Hey Dean...good to see your name pop up...and yes this is a scary 100 word story...the kind that has all the ingredients to make me whole my breath as I read and imagine the dripping from every faucet and my bath being drawn when I live alone. Yikes! 8-)
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Hey Dean...good to see your name pop up...and yes this is a scary 100 word story...the kind that has all the ingredients to make me whole my breath as I read and imagine the dripping from every faucet and my bath being drawn when I live alone. Yikes! 8-)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A pity you couldn't enter the contest Dean 'cause this is a great horror write. The dripping tap and the ringing phone, great sound effects. Really enjoyed this and anther fabulous chapter in the Tiny Tales of Terror.
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A pity you couldn't enter the contest Dean 'cause this is a great horror write. The dripping tap and the ringing phone, great sound effects. Really enjoyed this and anther fabulous chapter in the Tiny Tales of Terror.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from country ranch writer
okay okay your dripping faucet is driving me nuts I don't want to die don't let her take you either Id have no one to pick on darn it
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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okay okay your dripping faucet is driving me nuts I don't want to die don't let her take you either Id have no one to pick on darn it
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Don't those leaky faucets drive you nuts, Country, LOL?
Thanks a bunch for the sixer and the review.
~Dean
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help I ham going crazy
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh I had no idea where you were going with this but it wound up nicely done.
I love your tiny terrors, they make some sense and end with a surprise.
Nicely done as always
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Oh I had no idea where you were going with this but it wound up nicely done.
I love your tiny terrors, they make some sense and end with a surprise.
Nicely done as always
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Thanks, Barb, I'm glad you liked the story. I appreciate the positive reply.
~Dean
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh, my gosh!!! I am so glad to see you back. We have missed you, my dark and scary friend! Your story is chilling, and the ending unexpected. I'm sorry the contest didn't work out, but one of the most popular poems I've poste on the site I did two weeks ago and I posted it after a contest closed before I could post.
Great job, glad to have you back!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Oh, my gosh!!! I am so glad to see you back. We have missed you, my dark and scary friend! Your story is chilling, and the ending unexpected. I'm sorry the contest didn't work out, but one of the most popular poems I've poste on the site I did two weeks ago and I posted it after a contest closed before I could post.
Great job, glad to have you back!
Rhonda
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015
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Thanks for having a run at this one, Rhonda. I appreciate the shiny stars and your comments very muc h. Morfe than that, however, I'm just really pleased to know that you enjoyed reading it.
Take care, and thanks again...
~Dean :}
Comment from BeasPeas
I enjoyed reading this interesting, well written, short story. (I had a sister-in-law named Nina. She was pretty scary, too.) The last three lines wrap things up nicely.
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I enjoyed reading this interesting, well written, short story. (I had a sister-in-law named Nina. She was pretty scary, too.) The last three lines wrap things up nicely.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from bard owl
This is exceptional. The telephone ringing and the dripping faucet immediately tells me that there is something bizarre going on. You are very talented with the macabre. You should have been able to enter the contest. You would have won!
Bravo!
Blessings to you and Nina,
Linda
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This is exceptional. The telephone ringing and the dripping faucet immediately tells me that there is something bizarre going on. You are very talented with the macabre. You should have been able to enter the contest. You would have won!
Bravo!
Blessings to you and Nina,
Linda
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When will I ever learn not to read you before I go to bed???? Some people just never learn. Once again you have a great post and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.
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When will I ever learn not to read you before I go to bed???? Some people just never learn. Once again you have a great post and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Sasha
The contest is shown at the bottom so I hope that means you are entered. Absolutely fantastic work with this one and I seriously wish you all the best. Superb work with this one. Definitely a winner in my book. Seems this is an older one, I couldn't find the winner.
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The contest is shown at the bottom so I hope that means you are entered. Absolutely fantastic work with this one and I seriously wish you all the best. Superb work with this one. Definitely a winner in my book. Seems this is an older one, I couldn't find the winner.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
