Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Excellent Haiku (she devours him on) that fits the constraints of this type of poem precisely. Good luck in the haiku-spiders contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Alan, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Very good satori line and good imagery. Your haiku is well written in good form. Good luck to you in the contest.
teresa

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Teresa, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, this has got to be about the black widow spider, excellent imagery that can have so many meanings. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Jax, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

Well golly gosh I wonder who this could possibly be D! You are REALLY good at these nasty shorties! GREAT entry for this contest and I won't be at all surprised to see your #1 placement! Well done! :)S

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you visionary, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Spiders have always been considered cunning. I guess deception is a part of their game. Also, this is a sexual commentary on women preying on men. Wonderfully clever. Les

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Les, I appreciate your review. :) Is not about women, it is about black widow spiders who eat their males. :) grose

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Especially Black Widows, of the multi-legged and two legged kind. Some females thrive on devouring their mates as this well written poem so clearly depicts. Should be a good contest entry also. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Brett, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson

Excellent

Strikingly rich with stunning artwork. Haiku on spiders She Devours Him weaves its own web to entangle and entwine the reader. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Mom, I appreciate your review. :)

reply by The Mom/DarleneThomson on 10-Jul-2015

Your welcome

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

We have lots of the old gals with the red hourglass on their back. They love strips
of grass along walls and fences, but not the weedeaters that go with them. Ick.
Looks like an excellent 5/7/3 15-syllable haiku to me.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Lij Red, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is an eerie feeling entry for the prompt. Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is great--the color scheme, artwork, and words.

I see no changes. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Jan, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

A deliciously dangerous black widow spider haiku. Hourglass picture and text bathed in blood. Well chosen words give me the creeps. Thank you for sharing this bloody, dark haiku. I wish you success in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you Cat, I appreciate your review. :)